Hey, this is a really nice little piece. I love the descriptions that you use to portay events and feelings - and I think that you have captured the emotions perfectly too. I'll put this on my alert list - please update soon!

Tari

I liked this a lot. It was well written and interesting. The summary doesn't give too much away so I'm still waiting to see what happens next and where you're going with this. I liked the way you didn't put *too* much angst into it. I mean it's only the beginning. Plenty of time for that later.

Only piece of advice I have for you is write longer chapters -"*that's* advice?" you ask - yes. I enjoyed reading it, but it was over in a few minutes. Let's see you show your talents more. At the moment, the chapters break off before we see your true writing genius (and judging from what you've done so far, it'll be great!). Update soon!

Hey! I decided to read the second chapter before reviewing, so I could get a better grasp on the story. To put it blandly, I like it! It captures that sad, half-smiling feel of the very end of the game, where Yuna's whistling for Tidus.
I especially liked the way you wrote her whistling, with just short sentences and one-sentence paragraphs. I'm not sure exactly how, but I think it captures the feeling I, at least, got when I saw the whistling scene at the end for the first time. I was crying really hard at that point...T_T
Good story, and keep up the good work! I look forward to more ^_^