you have talent and are not afraid to use it be sure to give them what it takes:)

good luck mate

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Wow. I didn't know there were ZeroWing Fanfics... Awesome _ . I noticed a few typos, and I know some people go insane in stories where they are made to be the main character, but I like it over all (so far). Please, don't stop writing! ZeroWing was a surpisingly good game (in my opinion) despite its bad translation...

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...All your base are belong to...! *SMACK* ...Ha! I didn't feel a thing! ... O_o Oh...

Fascinating.