aw, that was nice!

I read it all in one sitting tehehe.

good job!

aw!! this is such a cute story!! good job!!

ngaw... that's so cute!!
please write a sequel!!
or if you already did, please pm me the title!!
I'll be looking forward to it!!
favoriting and subscribing 4 u!!

OMG!
evil granny!
NO!
I HATE HER!
and i dont usually hate characters
so great job you did there!
I'VE BEEN TOUCHED!
[lol tamaki moment]

aw! yay keiko and mori!
i can't wait for the sequel!!...there is a sequel right?
what am i talking about of course there is! a story this goo there has to be!

Sorry, I kinda hit the send button on my original review. -.-.

Anyway, I liked it A LOT!

Write more like this?

--Michy

I LOVE THIS STORY!
IT IS AMAZING AND CUTE AND ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.

Aw this is adorable. I've been looking for A MorixOC character and Keiko just seems perfect for him - a lot better than I could have imagined. I like your writing style too - understated and concise but pithy I think. You certainly managed to convey a lot.

Ah, the perfect happy ending. Such a joy and pleasure to read. I hope to see great things from this one. *dude that sounded like that Oliver-dude from Harry Potter. You know the dude who makes wands. Hehehe I think I'm having an overlapping thing with the books/movies I read and my own personality.* YAY MORI!

I love your story..

it's sweet.. Mori is so sweet!!

~^^~

i liked it but the ending was to much like idk a happy ending and to soon but it was good

i thought the ending to this last chapter was absolutly adorable XD i can just imagin mori's face when he confesses his love and it's the cutest thing! thank you for the wonderful read. you are a very talented writer and i hope to see more soon :)

aw

Really sweet.Oc seems NON merry sueish-wich is hard to find.

Hm, I want to see a sequel. lol.