Love it!

As before, beautiful work, but I suggest creating mega long chapters that will cover a vast amount of the story

Really nice. But as someone said before, this isn't really "fanfiction" just a novelization, it may have more success on fictionpress, but that's my opinion in general this is a well thought out story, you've really paid attention to the game, and the detail is incredible.

I give it a 9.7 out of 10.
Great work.

Very good story and very well written.

I only8 have two problems but they are just off my point of view, nothing against your style.

1. Its never a great idea to try and write a fanfiction off just the game.

2. There is already a story about Resident evil 2. Its called 'City of Dead' or something like that, by S. Perry i think. :(

Overall a great story though, i'd like to see more of your work sometime :)

Holy **! o_0 This must've taken you a while, good luck. I wish you my best

You should really try to divide the paragraphs a little differently. I mean, I'm sure that the story itself is good and all, but I'll never know, because I'll never read it. Or at least until you format it a little better. No one likes to see a big 'ol block of text bunched up together like that.

But other than that, judging by this first chapter alone (I haven't read anything past that because of the formatting problem), it's pretty alright.