brilliant story
great use of imgary
but maybe the use of the word baby was used to much

but otherwise its a thumbs up

good job

miss sunhill x

I never really liked Jam b4, always a Huxon girl, but I think you may have jus converted me 2 ur side! :p

That ending was good anyway; don't worry! Great story!!

I. Love. You.

three words [and probably more] I LOVED IT!
ah! amazing! awesome! SENSATIONAL! lol
absolutely love it! you have to right more jam! lol
omg i'm going to die now! lol
talk to you on msn!

i like it even thou i dnt normally like sam/jo still like it Sarahx

w.o.a.h

totally out of breath

too visual!!

lol

Beth

x

This is great hun, although I'm not the biggest Jam fan anymore. Ud soon x

hmm...you don't need to ask me if i loved it cos you no i did! :P absolutely brilliant hun! just add the next chapter before i go ** mental! lol

omg! i love you! :D just for me! :) lol absolutely BRILLIANT babe! thankies! but you didn't write desert! :( lol hope you are sittin at the computer writin it now! :P lol or i will turn into a bully once agian! :P