I wish the end had a bit more romance.. But alas, the story was amazing!

omg ... amazing , just amazing . a truly amazing story (in a good way)

Very nice. I cried at the end!

"Some new stuff my the middle or end of May", huh? MAY! *not very subtlely making a point* Anyway, I think that this is a STUNNING story! Don't listen to the voice! Fight the Power! *punches fist in air* *sweatdrops* Ehehe...! Sorry about that; it's a school thing. *grin*

Well, I for one think that this story is awe-inspiring! And to think you say this is your first fanfic. *whistles in admiration* Kudos!

Poor, ignorant, Misty!

Hmm. Interesting... *trails off in thought*

A lovely ending. Again, it's nice to see that Ash can really be a nice guy.

Another great chapter. It's great to see Ash show some emotion. I think he's too flat a lot of the time. Can't wait to read the last chapter

A flurry of emotions mark this chapter, and well done ones too! Misty's constant battle is really remarkable and poignantly done.

I really like this start. As someone who has treaded that dangerous line before with eating disorders, I think you did a really good job of capturing the mental anguish that comes with it.

Here are my five questions for this fanfic. 1. What is this fic about? 2. What locations are being used in this fanfic? 3. When does it take place? 4. How old is everyone in this fanfic? 5. Besides Misty, who else is in the fanfic? Be sure to write back with five answers.

OmigOD, that was great! It made me cry, you wrote it so that I felt the pain as my own... wowie!

Well. ANyway, that takes away any ideas of going anorexic. XD

GREAT STORY!!

I need more! more! lol XD Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up! XD

Great job so far! XD can't wait to read more! aww, poor Misty 0__o -sob-