dude that was awesome i <3 zigzag in this story. totally hilarious!

I really enjoyed that! It was nice to see a story that wasn't abput a girl going to CGL, and I honestly loved how Ziggy just burst out into song all the time. Awesome job. Write another Holes story!

Haha, you said 'gay-dar'
Nicely wrapped up. The final song really brought it all together, especially with Zig-Zag being all sad at the end.

Poor Zero! Hugs for Hector.
So, what, the police thought he stabbed Ruth? That's weird. Plus, wouldn't they have sent him to jail for that? I'm totally confused on this.

Gaspeth, a typo. Third to last line, you say 'the' instead of 'they.'
Snap. Good chapter though, made me burst out laughing which is very bad when the rest of the house is asleep.

Singing? Great touch.
I love how you mention the other things they've said in previous chapters. It's not just one confession at a time, and then forget about it.

This chapter made me laugh so many times it's not even funny. It took me a moment to remebe what a father in law is. (I forget things randomly.) Then I got it, and it was funny.
Love this: '“Was, dude!” Zigzag corrected, “I was gay.”'
And how does one set fire to a beach?

I LOVE it. VERY very original, none of that "girl-to-camp-green-lake" fluffy crap. The only problem I have with this is that you made Squid more of an asshole then he really is (and he's my favorite character!) Other then that, good job!

Zig is so cute. X3

LMFAO! i loved this story!
it was so amazingly good! i was cracking up the whole time!

hey pretty good story . the songs in it were funny and the stuff zero and everyone was pretty interesting. just thought i'd say pretty good job.i guess that's how guys would be like that i'm not use to it but i think you did a pretty good job doing it.

It's over... it can't be... i want more singing... (sniff) so sad...

but, it was really good and now that it's over, i'm depressed. i hope you write another one like it...

I really love your story please do a sequel or a new story where they tell more secrets

NO! IT'S OVER! I'M GOING TO DIE! Er... Maybe I'll survive... Yeah... But honestly, I love your story, I could marry it :D Awesome final chapter. I hope to see your name again soon =)

That was AMAZERING! so yeah, poor poor ziggy... I hope to see your name again!