Reviews for Cave Story: A Novel

Reviews For: Cave Story: A Novel

Anonymous Non-Registered Gu... 2007-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseFREAKIN AWESOME! Keep with the beastly style, and dont forget the occasional 1337!
Avlein 2007-04-11 ch 1,	abuseOh boy! Someone who is also writing a Novelization! Good luck with that! Although you do need some work on grammar and spelling, and the character's ingame personalities as well. Try your best anyway.
Fusionmix 2007-04-06 ch 1,	abuseHmm. Hmm. HMM. awkward silence 1. Grammar 2. Spelling 3. Why are all the characters so screwed up? 4. Why is everything in the entire story screwed up? 5. It's spelled Doukutsu Monogatari, and there is already a Cave Story fic titled that. 6. Toroko doesn't curse. 7. Quote isn't an ** like that. 8. Now I'm merely expressing opinions, don't mind 6 and 7 ^_^ Or is this one of those weird parody things? Because you seem to have not noticed that there are already 2 different novelizations of the game going on currently. You've got something here, but try not to butcher the characters. Especially not Balrog. He's a sensitive lil' guy :( And as for all the random cursing, I have to say that it does not fit, at all. No offense to you, but you seriously need to work on this before it is anything more than a generic fanfic which slaughters all of the magic in Pixel's created universe. Good luck on improving this. I might be more forgiving were it not some hideous hour before dawn.
Skylark Starflower 2007-03-30 ch 1,	abuseWow... Okay, one thing I feel I should mention: don't forget to check your spelling and grammer before posting things. ^_^ And as for the writing, well, there's potential but there are a few things you should try to work on. You're a bit heavy on the dialouge, try to work on describing what the characters are doing or feeling, or even the scenery. It'll make the story all the more interesting and increase chapter length. I hope this helps you, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next. ^_^

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