   Genevieve05 2008-02-19 . chapter 16Nice job, I really enjoyed it. |
| Callista Wolfwood 2007-10-12 . chapter 16 heheheh nice ending... |
 Ooo a jellybean 2007-10-12 . chapter 16wow, great story! So the time Star wasn't there, it was really the manhunter? |
 Spidey2 2007-10-12 . chapter 16lol! love it! |
 Jeremy Shane 2007-10-12 . chapter 16good story |
| Yetihunter 2007-10-11 . chapter 16 Well another great end to a great story. No problems that I could see here. Can't wait for the next great work from you. keep up the great work. |
| Callista Wolfwood 2007-09-14 . chapter 15 YAY they finally confessed their love! UPDATE! |
| Yetihunter 2007-09-09 . chapter 15 So finally one Lois. Well seems like this story is winding down. No problems that I could see as usual. Keep up the great work. can't wait for what looks like will be the last chapter in this story. |
| Jeremy Shane 2007-09-09 . chapter 15 good chapter & more please |
| Ooo a jellybean 2007-09-09 . chapter 15 yea! she confessed! great chapter! :D wow, lex actually has loyal servants |
| ArTeMuS09 2007-08-21 . chapter 14 Nice. How will he rescue them or her and how is Lois going to tell Clark she love him. Waiting for the rest. |
| Jeremy Shane 2007-08-21 . chapter 14 good chapter & more please |
| Nr.Six 2007-08-21 . chapter 14 Ugh evil Lex! Hope Clark and the Loises reunite soon! |
| Nr.Six 2007-08-21 . chapter 13 Hehehe, those dreams are very funny! |
| Yetihunter 2007-08-20 . chapter 14 Well another great chapter. Nothing wrong that I could see as usual. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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