love how Buddy is portrayed as his usual scheming tunnel vision focused on FOOTBALL self.

Like the attention to detail on all the medical stuff.

Nicely done, but I demand MORE STORIES!

Just discovered this and looking forward to reading it. I like how you write it as a series of brief scenes jumping from character to character much like the show.

Hi!

Well, I just wanted to show, after reading your note about not having much reviews, I really thought this fic really deserved some feedback and well here I am.D I've just discovered FNL and I'm a little bit addicted to it so I'm searching the net for fics. And I must say I really liked this one, liked it a lot. It has drama and team spirit, all in the right proportions. However, I do really not like how you finished it... Couldn't you give us a Panther's victory in their game to end it? All the team together showing they've come out of this with even more strength than before?;)

This was an awesome story! It was very true to the show, even the dialog was authentic! I just stumbled upon this story... I hope you continue it! I'm off to see what other fics you have )

Awesome story! Super well written and great idea, everyone was ttly in character! :) Thx for writing!

I really enjoyed this story. Not enough Riggins for my taste but hey, it still kept my interest. However, I was wondering what's going on with your chapters. It goes chapter 10 then chapter 13, so is there two chapters missing or was that just a typo?

Really great story... I loved it!

I'm just getting into FNL and I really enjoyed your story.

Don't take it down, I think it's great. I couldn't stop reading

Hey I absolutely LOVED this story! Im sorry people aren't really commenting on stories but its not because they don't like it usually we're just kinda busy and figure everyone else is loving the story just as much as we are so someone else will leave a much better comment to make up for it lol. But seriously, this was SO good! I really really did enjoy and I hope you do write more because i loved the father/son dynamic that seemed to be coming out of the story between coach riggins saracen and williams. Keep writing because you're really talented and i JUST got obsessed with FNL and it is probably my favorite show that i have ever seen since party of five ended in 20.

So, I just recently discovered Friday Night Lights for the amazing show that it is and literally watched all three seasons in less than a week... that being said, I have been searching, and searching for fan fiction to tide me over for the summer and hardly found anything, until I found your page and it was like a gold mine. You have no idea how much I appreciate all of the FNL fiction you've written.

As for this story, I just reviewed it a couple of chapters back, but I'd like to reiterate that I loved it and wish there were more well written ones like it out there. There is NOTHING wrong with it. I don't know why people wouldn't review except for maybe laziness. Honestly, I wish it were longer! haha great work!

So, first of all I absolutely love Corrinna Williams! You've written her and all of the other characters so accurately. Secondly, I am so happy to have stumbled across this story, because I have had the hardest time finding any good Friday Night Lights fiction with the Taylor family. I'm surprised there isn't more, but anyways, this is great so far and I can't wait to read more.

Overall, I really liked this.

I have absolutely no knowledge of Friday Night Lights before reading this with the exception of knowing it was High school football. This seems really interesting and when I've got more free time I think I'm going to have to do some research about this. I think you did a good job especially engaging a reader that has little idea what the heck was going on. On that note, the onyl thing I could suggest is that I don't remember hearing much about Buddy until he arrived at Eric's home. IT was a little confusing and I'm sure it was simply overlooked since he's probably a major character in the fandom.

Also, I'm sure most everything that you barely touched on, the steroids, Julie/Matt, etc. are all further described in the actual story and I think that was good of you to include it in here to further ties knots between your story and the fandom.

Also, as a piece of criticism, as I was reading I found a few sentences (very few, about half a dozen) that were a little difficult to understand due to missing words like "as" etc. My suggestion, at least with any of the newer work, is, going through each sentence to find what works. Read it out loud (even though it's very long, the rewards are very much worth it).

Like I said, it was really good, they're weren't even any spelling mistakes! I really liked it and would like to say keep going. I could honestly see this.

I just recently started watching the show (as in last Thursday - I had to find it online, because it's not being aired where I live) and this was my very first FNL fanifc I read (in case you are wondering, I do have some time on my hands to do all that reading at the moment. Won't last, though). Well, what can I say? I loved it. It's going right to my favorites.

Great story! I've been looking for a story that was a little more dramatic than who's dating who, and this is the first I've found. I've only recently started watching the show, but I found that I like it a great deal (which surprises me as I can't stand football!), and I think you did an excellent job fitting this story into the show.