i love this story..i read it a few times before..you're one of my fav author.and i really hope you will continue with this story.anyway keep on writing.
peace

HI, I don't know why I haven't read this one before certainly I've seen your others just to say whether you finish it totally or not it's really very good ..I love Grissom AND Sara together and the humour is great..thanks for sharing
Bernie

I miss this story. I hope you decide to continue it. It would be a shame to have a good story like this stall.

wow! why did i miss this story before? this is good!! i hope there will be a continuation of this:)

CONTINUE... SOON... PLEASE?? PRETTY PLEASE? I LOVE the story :) update soon... :D :D

I love this story! Are you ever going to follow-up from here? I would love to read more...

I laughed out loud at Brass's line: “Hey, guys. There is something vibrating over here, and if it’s not your cell phone, I don’t think I really want to know.”

YEA! Perfect ending to the chapter!


PS: I do know the story that you mentioned...I will go thru my favs to try to find it & let you know!

You sure do get to the point with your last lines, don't you??

I loved this part:
...The moment she saw him, standing alone on the driveway, with his tired eyes and wrinkled suit, she realized why she felt so calm. Her home was not this house, her life not the things within it. Her home was in him, her life with him, and as long as he was here with her, her sanctuary remained untouched.

Great last line!

Starting the story with the word 'vivisection', is definitely a way to get the reader's attention! I don't know how I missed this story...but I am already hooked!!

it's a different twist you have going here...I love it! keep up the story!

I just found this story and I love it! I do hope you will finish it. I really have to see what happens next! Please finish it!

i'm enjoying your story, please finish it!

Really good story. One of the better stories about Griss sticking with Sara. I'd love to see an update soon. Keep up the good work.