that is the same as chapter 8? wat is up with that?

I like it...
but there are a few spelling mistakes and I can't understand a few sentences.

OMG!

I totally love this story!

Hey i just finished reading what you have so far and it is awesome,
you so have to hurry up with the next update PLEASE

This story is brill!
Bit of swearing, but who the hell cares?

That first chapter is scary. *bites lip* Going to see other chappies now!! =D I just felt like saying this chapter sets the mood perfectly.

I love this story, but im confused how come others saythey like read up to chapter11 but i can only count five that are ther?
P.S im new to this thingy

omg i totally love this story so much! bruce is my favorite character 'm so glad hes in this story!

plz write more soon! plz plz don't just stop! plz keep going!

Omg i was so confused when i read this good thing u were up to chapter 11! or i would have been completely confused!

love it. review more. and get a beta.

Very good. It's well good. It had he grinning ear to ear with the reality of it. The opening was especailly good, I was nearly crying for her. Hope there's smoe to come.

Just one question, how did Phineox get his name?

*picks up bricks again*

I'M WAITING!

hav u read/reviewed my story yet

coz i updated it and have had ONE MEASLY REVIEW (btw, thx to whoever that was)

if you decide to take those drugs, talk to frank.

HI, I'M FRANK! YOU GOT DRUGS! THEY'LL NEED TO BE... ERM... EXAMINED BY ME!

so yeah

PLEEZE HURRY

(btw, i'm not frank, i'm zoe. or oxymoron. either way... yeah)

HURRY!

oh, ok.

*puts down fork and bricks*

so who can i throw these at?

PLEEZE HURRY!

or i may just eat you.

I wanna no wat happens now...

AW wenh will you do the next chapter