 midnightwaters 2009-04-27 . chapter 1This is a really, really interesting idea you got here...it seems so well thought out, too. Are you going to update anytime soon? |
 Aslook 2008-11-15 . chapter 1PLZ PLZ PLZ Update! I really want to know what happens! PLZ PLZ PLZ! |
 inukagome15 2008-05-27 . chapter 1Hey, are you going to update this? I've got a TON of questions about what's going on and you just said that all of them will be answered in later chapters. Also, why did you start two other stories without updating "Moments of Clarity" first? I've been waiting for AGES for an update on that story. :( Same goes for the other stories on your account.
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 DUDE omg WTF WOWW!! 2008-01-23 . chapter 1 hello
i like the story so far, mhm i do.
but if this is after Phantom Planet, wouldn't TUCKER be the mayor, or at least the youngest mayor?
ah whatever :) |
 Thunderstorm101 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Great prologue! I really can't wait to see what happens next with this fic... |
 Glacilius Caelum 2007-11-19 . chapter 1Well, I can't wait for this to update. However, I will admit that the entire jump up to this point without knowing anything about what's before this is a bit confusing. |
 RaidersEcho 2007-09-27 . chapter 1I love it! I had an Idea like it but I added my OC so I kept it to my self. Update soon please! |
 BarnOwl93 2007-08-29 . chapter 1O.O ... YEY. I have the feeling I'm gonna like this story. XD Not only is Dani somehow becoming one of my favorite characters, this story's interpretation of after Phantom Planet sounds interesting. Plus, Valerie hasn't totally given up hope of getting Danny for herself! That's AWESOME. (I'm as much of a DxS fangirl as the next, but DxV makes almost as much - if not AS much - sense as DxS. :P The conflict is great fun to read, in my opinion.) Your fics never cease to amaze me, WoM. *glomps* |
 Melodic Dreams 2007-08-29 . chapter 1Dani is just adorable. I also saw the fanart of how she looks like on DeviantART and she looks uber cool. There really isn't bad to say about this. I just got to love how Danny is oblivious to practically everything on the feud between Sam and Valerie with their reasons behind it.
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 knotted Curtains 2007-07-03 . chapter 1 Sorry, I was going to review earlier, but I didn't have the chance. I'll review now.
Ok, so this is the story you were talking about on Deviantart? The one with Youngblood and Dani? It sounds interesting so far. I'm guessing you've watched the spoilers, though, and know what's going on and based this chapter off of that. However, most people haven't seen these new episodes, so it's kind of confusing to read this at the moment.
That was my biggest problem with this chapter. It seemed that you were dumping too much on us at once. really, I don't think that's too bad of a thing, but Jazz is the mayor? Dani's now living with the Fentons? Danny's the ghost prince and being called on by the unknown 'ghost council'? That part is difficult to swallow, but possible. It just seems that, even with all these new additions, you also add little curiosities that you could easily explain, such as "The Toaster Oven Incident" that Dani mentions happened to Danny when he used his powers on hosehold appliances. Little things like that don't need to be kept in the dark, and clarifying them makes it much easier to follow along.
Though, I do have to give you credit for imagination. How long did you have to exercize your brain to fabricate this story? Humans and ghosts working together is interesting, and probably predictable since the show plays on it so much, but it's difficult to imagine the two societies integrating like that.
I do agree with the others, though. You need some sort of bad-guy villan to make this story a little more interesting. Knowing you, you probably have one thought up already, but it would be bad if you didn't. All these ghosts were evil, and now they're just suddenly good? -(what I really want to know is, what happened to Walker? He was the 'sheriff' of the ghostzone, so...)- Hopefully, someone will show up soon.
And... that's really all I have to say, except it's an interesting story that I hope you continue when you find the time. It'll be an interesting walk-through, especially when Youngblood enters the story... DaniXYoungblood is your crack pairing, right? I like it... though it'll be interesting to see how it plays into the story. Youngblood isn't a little kid anymore, right? I'm assuming you made Dani 16 so that Youngblood could be in the same school... I always viewed him as 10, or at most an 11 year old.
Good luck on the story!
Curtains over and out. |
 Fantasy93 2007-06-28 . chapter 1this is so good, i'm starting tp really really really ;ike this, I thought that cl0ock work was going to be there since he's so powerful and awesome, mhh maybe he was busy... |
 felinefairy100 2007-06-22 . chapter 1i love it! please update! |
 Adran06 2007-06-17 . chapter 1I really need to find a place I can see all the episodes of Danny Phantom at, so I can see what I probably wont see for a long time since Nick is stupid. Despite not having seen Season 3, and knowing I'll probably see spoilers, I already spoiled things due to my reading Fanfics anyway, since I have a fairly good idea of what happens, just not any of the details. I noticed its been a while since the last update, so I can only hope this story will be updated sooner rather than later. Keep up the great work and update soon!
TTYL,
Adran |
 tekaro 2007-05-25 . chapter 1Please, please, please, please, please update soon. i really like thisand the idea is great! AH! Please! |
 Shuricel 2007-05-19 . chapter 1I'm looking forward to the next chapter. xD |
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