Okay...so where's the sequel? I'm WAY excited!

Good story and you kept it along with how the characters were on the show. I tried to write Heat a few times, but it always ended up out of character so I stopped. Can't wait for the sequel.

This was great, I can't wait for the sequel. Wonderful job!

You're KILLING me! New rule...you have to submit at least 2 chapters at a time! This is great.

Okay, whoa! That twist I was not expecting!

You can't just leave the story here? Yikes!

:-) Great job! I'm very much involved in this story and trying to figure out whodunit...you've sucked me right into the action.

There will be more, yes?

Wonderful opening! I like the way you waited until the end of the prologue to tie in the title of the story...and very neatly tie it in at that. Great tension in this first bit...I understand the pressure Lonnie is putting on himself in this situation.

I can't wait to find out what happens next! Great job! :-)

Another good chapter. Keep up the good work, there aren't enough Heat stories on here, or anywhere else for that matter!

Great Chapter 2! This is really good! So you're working on 3, right?

Good chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

More Hugh! YEAH! This is good, hurry up and finish!

Good story so far. Keep it up, I want to see where this goes.