great story!

Hey!
Please update.
I really want to know wat will happen next
wat will kasumi tell Ranma about Akane
Thanx for ur story i like it a lot

oohh! please continue...the cliffie is to short cant wait for the whole story... hope you make the story longer.
update soon.

damn you...how dare you stop it at a cliff hanger lol

As the plot hasn't really started yet, I can't say wether I will like it or not. We'll see.

Also, your use of 'dweller' was wrong. Chigaimasu. A dweller is a person who lives at a specific place. A london dweller would therefore be a person who lives in London. An Amazom dweller would live in the Amazon, a river... The Joketsu's (joketsuzoku = joketsu people) homeland, is near Juusenkyou in northeastern China, Ching'Hai province, in the Bayan'Kala mountain range.
They should therefore be called China dwellers, Joketsu dwellers, or something similar. Wictionary probably can help you.

Hey!
I like ur story. I like how Ranma is always thinking about Akane.
Please update fast. I really can't wait to continue to read ur story.
Oh..My name is Jenny. U can call me Jenny.
May I ask ur wat's ur name?

this is wonderful ranma is getting worried about his tomboy, and i'am anticipating this meeting again.
update soon.

I always knew Akane had to know some other Master to be as good as she is. Her father isn't exactly the number one teacher in town ^_^.

also how did akane come to learn from another master

this is so intriguing will ranma will find out about this
i love that ranma worried about akane.
update soon.

this is quite interesting, I would love for you to continue and explain a little more about dragon and such

what series is this from or is it something you just made up it smacks of being made up to me

Great chapter! The dragon power seems cool, will she eventually take it when she's strong enough to use it? Anyway, I suppose with "finish your training" Kurei meant her martial art training?

“How am I supposed to know? I don’t baby-sit my sister. But for a 10 yen, I can do that for you if you want” -Great line!

akane has powers? Oi how did she get these?

Way too short, we don't even now if it's going to be any fun yet...