oh! fun! please write more!

HAZZAGRIFF

this story is good i wish i knew what's going to happen.

update it please. this is too good not to finish. please please please

please write some more of this story.

yahuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!i love it. i love the exchanges, the conversation. i love it, i love it! i love it!i know you wrote this a long time ago, bit i love it. how come you're not writing anymore?

Ooh, wow, very, VERY, *VERY* well written! Great ending...'But she hesitated.' Terrific! Keep GOING! -classica-

Wow! that was totally awesome! You better finish the story! You can't just write the best story I've ever read and not plan to finish it! Wow! You better update soon because I'm going to be checking back to see the ending! Keep up the fab work!

Wow! What can I say but "Wow"? That was everything, it was funny and romantic and tense and violent and really really well told. Definitely one of the finest, if not THE finest, piece of Newsies fanfiction I have EVER read. How did I go so long without finding this? I know I am getting really over-emotional here but that was fantastic. So what happens next?

Ohhh! I like! Turf wars? Manhattan and Brooklyn fighting? Spot liking his dead brother's girlfriend? Finish it, finish it! Action, betrayal, romance? Ya gotta love it! As for your title, it depends where you're taking the story. A title is worth an entire story though...just remember that, k?

o come on! i can't stand stories dat end like cliffhangers! but any ways it was really good.

...? is dat 'ow id ends? id der more...? umm..maybe a Part 2? o well fer wat id was, id was good. even dought I'se don't lak Oscar, but id's yer story.

k, well good job.

Good storie so far. Can't wait to read how it turns out.

You mention you needed a title so this is my idea Haughting Pasts.

i'm proud to say that i know the author personally! it's an awesome story, by far the best fanfic i've read...Bry, just give my secretary a call and i'll give your story to the "right sort of people" and it can easiy be a bestseller (hahaha!) like i've said before, keep writing and finish it already!

whooyeah- kickin story... ive read more than all you though! and i know the author...so i get it in advance... anyhoo it rocks! ((spot kisses shuffles!))

Cool story! Hurry up and finish it, please!