 Sesshylover4eva 2009-12-15 . chapter 7i love your story
its soo interesting
please update soon |
 MisstressofSeverusSnape 2009-11-17 . chapter 7please cont. ilove the story. |
 Rori Potter 2009-10-27 . chapter 7That was great. Update soon. |
 rilafbrk 2009-10-07 . chapter 7 Very good so far. But I was wondering, since Rion's the one Voldie chose to defeat him wouldn't he have the scar as proof instead of the real Harry? Anyway please continue and update soon!!XD |
 arashi wolf princess 2009-09-27 . chapter 7This story is wonderful. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ keep up the good work. |
 skorpian672 2009-09-05 . chapter 7love it =] |
 doxiesmom14 2009-07-27 . chapter 7i love this story. are you going to update or is it being discontinued |
 HarrySlytherinson 2009-07-19 . chapter 7please update soon! |
 Pigglet 2009-07-10 . chapter 7UPDATE SOON!
ON ALL YOUR STORIES! |
 ladyTiya 2009-06-15 . chapter 7 Please Finish this story. |
 arwin-urban 2009-05-12 . chapter 7aw so cute! can't wait for more! you are an awesome writer! |
 faith bonksie 2009-05-12 . chapter 7oh poor Remus!
Please continue soon |
 Myou Matsuro 2009-04-03 . chapter 7There are a few spelling errors here and there - I'd suggest using a spellcheck, but I'm sure there's so many people that say that...
But anyways, this sounds like a really interesting story - not everyday I get to see a Blaise/Hermione or a Ron/Pansy. :D
And I like how you've made the distinction between the old Harry and the new. The old Harry (Rion) is one that we've all known and loved - although I have to admit that near the end of the series as he hits puberty he's a tiny bit more like the new Harry. But anyways.
It seems a bit odd how easily Ron and Draco lose their animosity around the 2nd chapter (he's okay with just walking into Malfoy's room?)
In chapter 3, it's a little bit odd that you'd say "worried/guilty" by itself. It just doesn't seem quite...right. I'm sure you could work that in better (cos just leaving it like that seems a bit...amateurish)
In chapter 5, near the beginning-ish, you typed "As suck he escorted..." and I'm afraid that you misspelled 'such'.
There may have been other things, but I'm too lazy to make note of them.
Hopin' you're going to update~
It's been great reading. |
 LadyTiya 2009-03-27 . chapter 7 What is Taking You So Long to Complete A Story, I Mean Comoe On Leo You Are Really Slaking In Your Job. |
 millipi12 2009-03-24 . chapter 7This is a new and fresh idea. I love it. Its absolutely mind blowing. Potter's as evil hehehe never thought i'd see that happening. The way you write brings the story to life. A big round of applause on a job well done. I am glad that Rion (i am coming to love this name) is finally feeling safe w/ Draco. I can't wait to read the next part.
~Milli |