 mednin 2008-06-24 . chapter 4It's all right, take your time, but please update as soon as you can. |
 cherrysakura12345 2008-03-08 . chapter 4please hurry with the next chapter please |
 blossomheartxoxo 2008-03-07 . chapter 4OW UPDATE ITS GETIN GOOD ITACH X SAKURA 4 EVE ^^ |
 narutorocksXD 2008-02-28 . chapter 4im sorry for your losses take as much time as you need. |
 Mate-of-Sesshy 2008-02-25 . chapter 4I'm so sorry to here that i hope you get better :( Take your time we love you the naruto freak clud in the ATL.! Bye love yah! ^0~ |
 Phantom's Bride 2008-02-24 . chapter 4I'm sorry about your friends. I hope you do well. and Update SOON! |
 deepcutfighter 2008-02-24 . chapter 4oh please please update this story too i love it so much!
:D |
 zesty cyanide 2008-02-24 . chapter 4im really sorry for your loss.
hopefully your other friend will make it.
you shouldnt worry about the fic, there are more important things |
 cherrysakura12345 2008-02-23 . chapter 3HEY HOW COME U HAVENT UPDATED THE NEXT CHAPTER! ive been waiting and it still hasnt showed up :_( please hurry i really love this story :D |
 Hanako-chan92 2007-11-12 . chapter 3Nice job. But a word of advice. Aniki means older brother. When Itachi refers to Sasuke he says otouto, meaning little/younger brother. Update soon. |
 AKANEpanic 2007-11-05 . chapter 3O... I love it. Please hurry up and update soon!! Me no likey waiting... |
 Nairo Xana and Jemmi 2007-11-02 . chapter 21) When did she end up in the hospital
2) I thought you said she was the Akatsuki's slave
3) Too random for Itachi, a bit OOC
4) *reads next chapter* ^o^ |
 Nairo Xana and Jemmi 2007-11-02 . chapter 1Well...
It was okay, but I have a couple things to critique
1) If Sakura was out of the hideout, she would run away. Especially if she bumped into Naruto and Sasuke and obviously still missed them
2) Naruto would have been abdiment about bringing her back (although I'm not sure whether he will do that in the next chapter)
3) Everyone calls her cherry blossem...interesting
4) Itachi wouldn't kiss her
5) Sasori wouldn't trust her enough to clean his favorite puppet--he does that himself
6) You change pov (point of view) in random sentances (or rather, two sentances in the beginning were first and the rest were third)
7) It was written a bit like a screenplay, you need to add more details--what does the hideout look like, why do they let her wear an Akatsuki cloak when she's a slave, stuff like that
8) *goes on to read next chapter* |
 narutocraze1233 2007-10-30 . chapter 3hey! i read the other story "i'm someone" or something like that and i loved it! plz update on this one too! and u wrote so many good stories! keep updating! i love ur fanfics! |
 sweetcherry99 2007-10-16 . chapter 3finally!! hope it doesnt take long to get chapter 4 out !? plss dont make me suffer! |