This chapter almost made the hopeless romantic in me cry.

Woah!!
Shego broke up with her.. So sad..
Huhuhhu..
Pwease update, I wanna know what happens next :P

Great story. I love it. Most of all I like your "childish" Kim, she's a very interesting character. But also your Shego is good, even if she's a little heavy sometimes, eheh. ;-) I hope you'll update this story soon, because I'm looking forward to see what will happen after this "break up".

i love it you should update soon. please please pretty please like its been months of waiting so now im saying something. UPDATE ALREADY! much love

kitty =^_^=

keep going I love the story line.

wow i like how u force kim to grow up nice

o, its getting interesting. very well written to link it back to the start of the story. please update soon

^^

Ouch, poor Kimmie. But Shego's right. And I'll just have to wait for next chappie to see if Kim learns something from all this.

What a bummer of an ending.

Wispr

What a nasty chapter, feeling bad for Shego though how Kim let her down.

Wispr

Rather intense chapter.. you are really good at getting the strong emotions across in your writing.

Wispr

That dance scene was really well written... very vivid and the words flowed very smoothly. OK... it was bloody hot to! ;)

Wispr

Oh this is bloody good, love the emotional level in it.

Wispr

Another good chapter... like the realism in how people are reacting to things. Good work.

Wispr

You did a great job with that scene between Kim and Shego, as Shego got the reality of Kim situation through to Kim.

Good work!

Wispr