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| waterspirit101 2007-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was really powerful and I think you did a good job of capturing Lady Illusion and the relationship she shares with Ace. You've also shown how Ace feels about Lady Illusion leaving him. Unfortunately they were never able to cover this in the TV series. You've used a lot of emotive language in your story as well and that has made it a very intense read. All in all, you've done rather well. |
| Scarabbug 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseFinally fanfiction net is letting me SEE and REVIEW these damn things again. You know I like. its atmospheric in a way I don't usually associate with Ace, but I think it works for him, characterise, none the less. Emotional without being too drippy and... I think it deals with the whole sitution well. "He wishes he remembered more of a kiss, another rescue; not even ten words said, atop a dais in the centre of the Carnival." - that line is sheer love. Mostly because I've just been reading a YuGiOh fic and.. .well, odd pairing and a dias and... lack of clothing were involved and you remminded me, curse you :P |