really cute. love it (especially the picture that heiji kept)

Heiji still gave her the coat with the coffee stain on it. That was very in character for him. XD

Great Job!

I just have to say that THAT was super cute and awesome.

I love how it was all subtle, short and sweet.

Aw! It's so perfect! I adored it! :D I really like the ending...

haha! the warning was right, the spoiler was subtle. anyway... o with the review..

this made me think when i was reading the first part, okay, it's a KazuhaXHeiji story.. i really really didn't find it into depth. but as i continued, things grew more interesting and more sweet. it became better and in the end, i really really loved it. thank you for such a nice fic. this was such a nice work. i hope you write more fics like this.. HK will be nice.. KA would be too. though, i tired from SR. :P too overrated and abundant. haha!

oh, btw... want to know why i loved the fic so much? because it was as if someone really close to heiji and kazuha was writing this. i felt as if i was in the fic and just seeing everything happen. it was such a nice feeling. again, great job.

well, i guess that's all. till next time! :D

nicC

That was so cute.

Guhh, so adorable! I loved it I specially liked the part with the tea. And your Heiji is very cute. Guh.

So here I was, sad and bored and in desperate need of good romance fanfiction to brighten up my day. Then I decided, "what I *really* need is some Heiji and Kazuha... D:" And then the first two I found were really bad, and I was almost giving up and going to sulk in some corner when I spotted your story. "Well, it can't do any harm to try again... hey - it's fireblazie! I've heard of her, let's see what she can do" I thought.

SO YOU SEE. It was fate that put you in my way. Did that make any sense at all? xD

I hear you're called the Heiji/Kazuha Queen? It's incredibly fitting! :D You are amazing. And going to my Favorites, hope you don't mind... P

Ah, very nice. It was a very smooth read, and I'd like to compliment your writing for that. I also like how you did the scene-shifting-going from Heiji's perspective then to Kazuha's, and back and forth again. Very nice. :D

Beautiful!

It's been a long time, indeed. But your story still a SUPER. Hehe. What can I say... it's so cute. Beautiful.

I LOVED IT

C.U.T.E.!

OMG! *insert dramatic background music* we all were waiting, we hoped, we prayed, and at least, finally it happened!

FIREBLAZIE IS BACK!

Oh my, you never heard from me, but I always read your stories, and I am a very big fan of yours! Calling you the "heiji and Kazuha ff Queen" is truly an understatement!

This story was so awesome! I really feel this story, it is like... when reading it, you feel so comfortable D I watched a boy and a girl, both in love with each other, each of them guarding their feelings for each other so carefully... I saw them in your story how they were together through the seasons, and... man, I truly loved it ) The way Heiji and Kazuha shared their time togehter was just so NATURAL! And how they discovered the box/photoalbum was just GREAT! I think my favourite part was after Kazuha burned herself with the tea and Heiji holding her hand under cool water! This little exchange they had *sigh* it was so cute!

I'm so glad that you updated! You have NO IDEA how happy you made me with updating an awesome story like this! I mean, I squealed! In public! And I hope that you'll update again... and again... and again...

You still got it, hon-and I doubt you will EVER lose it :D This was perfectly lovely. THIS IS WHY YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF HEIJI/KAZUHA, YOU HEAR ME! *luffs on you until you turn polka dotted*

Yay! So glad you're back!

Of course, I am deeply loving this fic. It really shows how their lives are parallel and effect one another in ways they aren't even fully aware of yet. Erm... that doesn't make any sense, does it? I hope you know what I mean! It overall REALLY brings them together and I think that's what makes this piece so very sweet.

I only found one error: "“What are you doing here?” she asked, and he pretended not to here, taking his shoes off at the doorway." Wrong 'here', right?

Anyway, regardless, wonderful wonderful! *faves*