O I never thought of this couple. I like it now! No...I LOVE IT! XD

That didn't suck at all...
I'll add it to one of my favorites in fact!
Hehehe
I'm actually wanted more after I was done reading it >w

this was well written. You got a good sense of the characters and-
*yaoi fangirl takes over* OMG I FREAKIN LOVED IT!! HOTTNESS!! >w<
^_^

uhh...the...the part about kankuro made me fall out of my chair...

poor poor araiguma!

wow wow that was SO wrong you have scarred me for life

why is it in gaara/kankuro if it's really gaara/yashamaru?

oh my fucking god.
this is so horribly wrong yet somewhat intruiging...

although now I don't think I'll ever be able to look at those two the same way again, ack. xD;

two words!DEAR CHRIST!

Pretty good. Far from the worst thing I've read.
Your main problem is just spelling and grammatical errors. Some proofreading could be of great use. A few noticeable mistakes would be your misuse of the word "than," run-on sentences, and an incorrect spelling of "Yashamaru" in paragraph 70.
The storyline, however, was very good, believable in a Fanfiction sort of way, and pretty well thought out.

Probably... a 6.9/10.

it doesnt suck its hot although i am also a virgin

Its really good, but Im like 95% sure that Yashamaru dies when Gaara is 6.But yeah you did a good job on this!

o_o
Wow. Lol.
This was soo creepy, but kept my attention for some reason, haha!
I love it. :D

OMFG girl u rock i know that you'll get better at this man i couldnt stop reading it was just catchy. Ya Rock. oh and thats my myspce email so look me up