I now dislike Carri. No child should be called an accident for any reason. And she could have defended herself against the other woman without going overboard and breaking her nose.

On a positive note, I love that you had Bulk and Skull morph into pink rangers. :)

This is probably the best chapter so far.

Interesting couple of chapters. I like that you have Jason and Tommy leery of the reformed Zedd and Rita. And Kim's mom has a good reason for her own fears of Tommy. Carri is one of very few original characters that I've seen who actually manages to keep from being a Mary Sue. So, good job.

Overall, I am finding this interesting. I do get confused at times (about the Nova Rangers and Kemora and Kim being previously married). Was this stuff explained in a previous story?

This adds to my review of chap 14. Okay, I guess I can see why Kim had been indifferent to Tommy in the beginning. She tried to make up with him and he was a world class jerk. I still don't know if I like Tommy in this fic. He always thinks he deserves to know everything, specifically before they got married. Even Jason thinks Tommy is controlling. Sometimes Tommy just seriously bugs me.

I think I enjoy Carri/Rocky and Billy/Trini and even Adam/Tanya more relationship wise in this story than Tommy and Kim. That's sad because I'm a huge T/K fan, but the Tommy in this story kind of annoys me big time. I enjoy a tough and respected Tommy, but I also like a sweet Tommy, who's a bit more forgiving (doesn't hold a stupid grudge for ten years), and less controlling in personal relationships.

I guess it's a big nod to your writing that you can write a character that I have a strong opinion on.

So far this story is good. It has caught my attention and kept me from doing actual work. There are just some things that bug me though. Not to nitpick, but just a little constructive criticism. I don't flame people ever, I know I hate when people do that to me. Plus your writing is way better than the stuff I wrote years and years ago, and cringe when I read the stuff I wrote when I was younger. Anyway, it's kind of annoying when the spellings of certain people's name constantly change throughout the story. example: Aisha/Aiesha, Kemora/Kimora, Tanya/Tonya.

This is just my opinion, but sometimes I find it hard to believe Tommy and Kim are in love in this story. Before they got back together, I hardly saw any signs that Kim was leaning back in that direction. She just seemed kind of indifferent. When she was dying, suddenly she called him "Love"? Seemed a little out of the blue. And why does Tommy come off as this pushy, obnoxious, hard a$$ a lot in the story? When he'd put his hands on Carri or Kim's shoulders and tightened, that seemed really weird and a little abusive.

At times I had a hard time liking Tommy in this story. I know this is suppose to be the grown up versions of T/K, but at times they both just seem out of character. Anyway, aside from T/K's kisses or signs of affections I have a hard time believing their in love based on their actions at times. Maybe you're not a romance writer, because obviously this story is more than just about romance. I enjoy all the other side stories tremendously, but I just have a hard time buying that T/K love each other at times in this fic. No offense, but just my opinion. I'm still going to finish the story.

I read this wonderful series and all I can say is wow. I truly acknowledge and appreciate all the time and effort u put into writing something as complicated as this. Not only was the characterizations in depth but they really made me believe your take on who each PR was. For instance I am a Jason fan and I always knew him to be strong and someone that hardly ever gave up but in your fic it seemed like he did give up easily. Yet, I believed it because it made sense the way u plotted it.. he still fought on with Kim.

Kimberly has always been my favorite PR. Who knows why...and I always imagined her to have powers like that and you illustrated it so well. I love the twin thing between her and Jason. I loved the character Carri, she made me love Rocky more and thats weird because I expected not to like Rocky with anyone but Aisha.

Tommy/Kim has always been my fav pairing and you wrote that well. The Billy/Trini was great. Everything.. and I loved how Kat was portrayed too because although u didnt bash her u showed a side of her that I agreed with. In general if I didnt say it enough your an amazing writing and I hope you continue to write.

Please reply back to me if possible, could you be my beta or at least help me be a better writer? Thanks for ficc

- Jo

OMG, That was Frigging AWESOME.

Awesome!

AWESOME!

Great work.

Great work.

Great work.

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