 corkieshome 2007-10-17 . chapter 9Great story! Well written, good plot and plenty of tension and excitement! YOU ROCK!! Keep writing! :0) |
 SciFOXcraft 2007-07-14 . chapter 9Dogpile! Lol; that was a nice ending. And you were right... it was definately something that John would come up with.
"Hopefully with just some minor cuts and bruises..."
Poor Sheppard. The bottom of the dogpile beneath 25 or so Athosians. Beckett has his work cut out for him.
:) Nice job, the story was well written, and I look forward to more fics from you! ;) |
 jasminesmommy 2007-07-14 . chapter 9lol i can imagine that to be one heck of a scene :) |
 jasminesmommy 2007-07-11 . chapter 8interesting little story you got here hehe thanks for the interesting read :) |
 SciFOXcraft 2007-07-11 . chapter 8Yay, Sheppard's back! And in the end, Jolinos did the honourable thing; that was a nice touch ;). I also liked the military logic. This chapter was well worth waiting for. Eagerly awaiting the epilogue,
A.M.B.A. |
 Questfan 2007-07-11 . chapter 8Wow! I just found this so thankfully I didn't have to wait for chapters to come out. That was a great story and you'd never know English is not your first language. Thanks! |
 ManicTater 2007-05-31 . chapter 7Yeah, Sheppard! |
 ManicTater 2007-05-31 . chapter 6I'm glad everyone was still cautious regarding Sheppard. I look forward to more. |
 ManicTater 2007-05-31 . chapter 4I'm glad it was Major Lorne to hold Shep down during the blood draw, and to stay in the cell overnight. I like how Lorne handled everything, he was very thorough. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh, and I like your characterizations. |
 ManicTater 2007-05-31 . chapter 2I'm enjoying the story very much. I like the humor. Thanks for sharing. |
 E. Nagrom 2007-05-29 . chapter 7Hey only just found this fic now, really interesting love the name Julios and can't blame him for wanting Johns body, after all being locked up in a ball for 10,0 years would be tough.
Can't wait to see how this ends
E.
Oh just a quick question, why couldn't they just give him a Goa'uld size sedative when Julios was trying to take over? |
 sherryw 2007-05-29 . chapter 7Alright another chapter. Finally Jolios showed himself. I can't wait to see what's planned next. How are they going to get him out and are they going to keep him in the brig. Looking forward to more. Update soon! |
 CanadianHalliwell 2007-05-29 . chapter 7I could of sworn I posted a review for this chapter. I can't believe Jolios would make a mistake like that. His impatience let the cat of the bag! |
 faldo 2007-05-28 . chapter 7Getting very interesting! |
 Tinker Belle Blue 2007-05-28 . chapter 7ek! |