Seems like an awesome story. Keep writing...
By the way your grammar and speeling are impeccable

I really really hope you continue with this...All the crossovers in your list? It would be hilarious! Albeit complicated...Please write more!

this is good except i don't know anyhting about crossing jordan please write more?

Okay, this is interesting. I hope you can update soon, I want to see how you'll play this one out!
~DAP