LMAO! That was hillarious! I especially liked the "where are we?" "Bad headache." "We're at bad headache?" :D

oh i love it XD

Writre another chapter!

It's good-- a bit of a weak ending, but still all right.

About TrisxBriar-- In The Will of the Empress, both Sandry and Briar and Tris, I believe, mention that they wouldn't date or have relationships like *that* in the Circle, since it would be like dating a sibling, so any fics with TrisxBriar, SandryxBriar, DajaxSandry, TrisxDaja-- whatever they are, slash or not, they are inaccurate. (I have a Triar-- hey, I just made that up, LOL-- fic up, so I'm being a hypocrite, but I'm just telling you.)

Keep writing!

This was pretty good. I would recommend that you combine some of your sentences into paragraphs, though. It will make is less choppy and flow better.

God Job!

That was good or shall I say GREAT. I personally am not a fan of TrisBrair. You however have written a wonderul and amusing story. Keep it up.

M.
Me likie.
B+ or A-.

Woot! That was awesome! Short, sweet, and to the point! But creative as well! I can't wait to see some new stories.
*~~*Pie

I liked it. And I love this pairing, but no one else seems too. Good job. And the only pairing name I can think of at the moment is just the plain, boring TrisBriar.