I like to think that the two old men keeping the ranch are the ''real'' Jack and Ennis, from the movie. Lol :P

the story is good but the chapter was the best so far, wow. I'm shaken up, congrats.

I love this. Kinky, playful, but still very loving.

I'm really liking this story and your characters. I specially like Ennis, an Ennis who is for once highly educated but still has the same strong, quiet personality. I can definitely understand Jack's attraction to Ennis (even if we don't imagine a Heath Ledger look alike)... Plus the case of the Thurstons has very intriguing details to keep us readers interested.

OMG, I am definately reading part 2 hope&fate xx

Me again. In chapter one there were some spelling mistakes."Law shcool was hard for him" should have been school.

Also, you should probably explain why a boy from Wyoming would go to University at the University of Texas and not Wyoming.

Looks good so far. Just a little helping hand for a non native speaker and someone who might not be from the west. Redneck is one word not "red neck" like you have it written. I am from Texas so it just bothered me a bit. The rest is good though. This story concept is pretty interesting.

Just.. Congratulations for Elizabeth. With the looks like that she could easily be a Mary Sue or just plain boring but she's not :)

hi. i'm not sure how i ended up at this chapter of your fine stories, but i just wanted to tell you how much i miss this fine story. and miss you too.

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Ah, I love stories like this...where there is an attraction for one person and it takes time to build the relationship. I have a feeling that's how this story will go and I appreciate that. It makes everything more meaningful. Good story so far! Had you not said at the beginning English wasn't your first language, I would have never guessed. I forgot to mention in my other comment that I loved how you are building Ennis's character up by putting his history. I thought it was sad about his parents! Anyway, I love how things are going. *grins*

Sounds exciting! :D

love the modern twist to the movie, great job

cool! i really liked the movie and ur fic is great!

The kiss scene between Ennis and Jack was spectacular. I am totally in love with this story! Beautiful work!

A fabulous first chapter! I love it. The only thing is the occasional use of slightly the wrong English word, but that is nothing to be concerned about at all. Great stuff. :)