That was so cool!

Wow. This was... wow. I hope none of it went over my head. This is crazy, deep stuff.

Thanks,
~Haleybird

Crap, that was one of the scariest stories I've ever read. And . . . why does it make so much SENSE!? Despite being confusing! Augh! You're an amazing author, you know that? Damn beautiful and amazing at it.

This story made absolutely no sense, but I guess that was the point.

Congratulations, you have creeped me out beyond belief. o_o *shivers* The way you set everything up, and the mood was just so...intense, and outright scary.

Makes me wonder just what the boundaries of human imagination are.

Where do you GET these ideas?! You're amazing...

Goodness! I really liked the idea of this fic. There is so much that could be done with something like this. The first chapter with Truth was filled with possibilities, the second chapter screamed a potential reality, and the third one linked several ideas. I'll say it again, and truly great and original idea though sad.

This is possibly the craziest thing I have ever read, with the exception of spacehussy's Realism on LJ. Really, really good. Well written, well executed, and well imagined. How on earth did you get the idea for this?

1:24 am! I'm awfully addicted to fanfics. ;.; And it was so confusing too! I still don't know what's true and what's not. Anyway.

Hugs & Kisses & Cookies & Merry Christmas
Luna Lunak

Oh, I totally love Mustang here. :)

Hugs & Kisses & Cookies & Merry Christmas
Luna Lunak

I loved this. It's one of the most intellectual, creative, well thought out pieces I have ever read on . Really, it's something to be proud of, even though it's a bit confusing. It'd be great if you could summarize the whole story.

This is a wild story. I liked the strange twists and turns. One little thing to point out. In this chapter, you say Ed gave up his leg to transmute Al's soul to the armor when he was already missing his arm. That's backwards. Edward lost his leg in the Transmutation to bring back his mother, that caused Al to loose his whole body. Edward sacrificed his right arm for the chance to grab Al's soul back and attach it to the armor.

Otherwise great. Is there going to be more of it? Another twist? or is this where it ends?

Woah... That was intense.
Great job!
I've never read a fic anything like this before. I look forward to reading the rest!

I'm not sure whether I'm appalled or delighted. Wow. This is some story.

What a confusing story... I love it, though!

Real, not real... What is real, anyway?

Please continue! I don't want it to end yet...

This was...amazing. I was riveted to every word. I can't even begin to describe the multitude of emotions that plagued me while I read this. The turns the story took horrified me, entranced me... I felt like crying the whole way through, and finally the tears broke out in the second chapter. But man, this is one awesomely intense story. I really, really like this, in all its dark glory. You've really got a talent for writing, and I hope you pursue it.
This is totally going on my favorites. Keep writing amazing stuff like this! ^_^

WoW...
your story is really weird,but in a good sense?xD~
I´m totally confused if Ed was real now or not xD"
It´s really great,the writing style is nice,too.
Keep up the good work!