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JenniferPlague
2007-07-25 . chapter 4
Aww, the frustration! :(

But at least they're talking to each other. (and this is a more humorous idea of post-Acid Tokyo than I would ever dare XD)

I didn't know about the summer contest until today... and I'll have to enter, seeing as how I missed the KakaIru death challenge because I moved (and had to pack up my computer for over a month).

Now I'm just sitting here, eating oatmeal that the frozen strawberries turned cold, wondering why I can't remember anything from the history class that I finished just last month...
Memory Dragon
2007-06-30 . chapter 4
I'm actually not to fond of drabbles... Possibly because I always like taking far more space to say what I want. However, I really sort of liked the perception one. It's got the edge of their relationship that most people skip over in order to make it sappy. It captures the essence of a drabble well, focusing on one aspect most people don't catch (or are trying to ignore).

Anyway, just thought I'd say I liked it. ^^

--Memory
lily23
2007-06-15 . chapter 1
Oh my god. That was good. I liked the last two lines.
BigBlacKitty
2007-06-11 . chapter 4
WHY do these drabbles have SO LITTLE REVIEWS?!?!

I absolutely adore every single one of them, I can hardly decide. The third one has to be one of my favourites, though, being an equally scarred soul from Chapter 148. The way you described the fall and the trauma- it shook me up so bad. You have such a talent for twisting words around, making them flow. -sighs- Amazing. I envy you. ^ . ^

The last one: Perception. That one was the heaviest, along with Wish. I loved how it started: "Oi, mage! Wall!" -laughs- Kurogane is so blunt, it always makes me giggle. Poor guy. And the last sentence made me wince. It was so blunt and direct once again...so...Kurogane-ish. You write the best KuroFai ever...-worshipping smile- You can count me in as a watcher for this fanfic collection.

And finally, wish. I loved the way you used the time issue, the clock that has stopped running for Fai, the way he dodges and runs from death as long as he can manage, because he thinks he should have died long ago. -cries- I love Fai...poor, poor guy.

Thank you so much for sharing these drabbles. Added to Fav and Alert~!
DemonUntilDeath
2007-04-03 . chapter 4
That was great, I absolutely loved it! Especially that last line of Kurogane's, it was absolutely amazing!
anbumoo
2007-04-02 . chapter 3
yeah, i know what you mean. clamp's insanely evil.

but we love them for that. >D

great job with this fic, by the way! i don't know much about ashura and yasha (never read RG Veday), but Fay's (Fai's, or Fye's.. whichever you prefer) POV-ish things were done really well!

keep up the good work! :D
Lynne5
2007-04-02 . chapter 3
Yeah, Clamp like to mess with fan-girls head, doesn't they? I love this drabble, and when you link it whith the recent event (like stabbing Sakura ) it is so...sad.
You wrote it well!
Tsubameminoru
2007-04-02 . chapter 3
wow! I really loved this chapter, but of course I liked the others as well, Hm... little Fai as the blond Sadako...*cute* but scary...haha XD
Well I have to say your words really described the drabble pretty well and I kinda liked the YashaXAshura conversation... very nice.
hope you update soon! ^ ^
123
2007-04-01 . chapter 2
molten butterscotch *drools*

I love both drabbles!
DemonUntilDeath
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
I actually really liked that! I'm sure others have said or will say this as well, but I do wish you'd continue that drabble. Of course, than it would be the most excellent drabble that it is. Great job, fantastic story.
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