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Reviews for: Early To Rise
AirDragon717
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
I really like this. I was gonna be a typical lazy person and not review, but I decided that I really wanted to tell you I though this was a great fic.

AirDragon717
ear145
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
woo! fluff!
This is one of the sweetest Win/Ed fics I've read in a long time! *
call me CoCo
2007-05-05 . chapter 1
i like...lots!
Mango-moo
2007-04-25 . chapter 1
AW! So cute! and so well written! the best FMA piece I've seen in a while! great job u write really well!
bydneley
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Yeah I quite agree with the others simple yet neat and evenmore sweet. Good job ^_^
kuroxdoragon
2007-04-19 . chapter 1
aww, this is soo cute!! ^.^ write more!
Lyra Ngalia
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Very cute. Short and sweet, as well as a nice use of repetition. Though it would be a bit easier to read (and neater looking) if it was left aligned instead of centered.
Gabunny
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Lol, another wonderful fic. I think it best if I stop reviewing and just favourite all of these ^_~
S J Smith
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Aw, this is very very sweet. Love the repetitive of, "In the morning..." It sets the tone very nicely.
I.8023.u
2007-04-03 . chapter 1
ohh its so sweet! hehe keep writing!
CyanideSamurai
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
i like a lot, fluffeh lol
ShadowDragon-24
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute! I absolutely loved it, very nicely writ!!
ElricKeyblade
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a great oneshot! I am really struck by the simplicity yet sweetness of it all. Great job! Got any more? ;)
Bar-Ohki
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
That's so sweet. I liked it a lot.
Twisha
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
Aw, precious EdWin fluff! Love it. I like the way you keep repeating the "he knows she's there" line. It gives it a nice flow. The only thing that I had trouble with is the centering. It throws me off and makes it hard to read. Awesome content though.


(If you could, I would greatly appreciate if you could review my very short fic "Auspicious Beginning" **big puppy eyes**. I really want to hear from authors that I like because this is my very first fic ever and I respect your opinion. It's ok if you don't though; I still like your fic! Disclaimer-I'm putting this request on all of my positive reviews because I want to get better, and this is the best way I can think of. If you already have read it, my most sincere thanks, you rock!)
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