 AirDragon717 2008-12-05 . chapter 1I really like this. I was gonna be a typical lazy person and not review, but I decided that I really wanted to tell you I though this was a great fic.
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 ear145 2007-06-06 . chapter 1 woo! fluff!
This is one of the sweetest Win/Ed fics I've read in a long time! * |
 call me CoCo 2007-05-05 . chapter 1 i like...lots! |
 Mango-moo 2007-04-25 . chapter 1AW! So cute! and so well written! the best FMA piece I've seen in a while! great job u write really well! |
 bydneley 2007-04-21 . chapter 1Yeah I quite agree with the others simple yet neat and evenmore sweet. Good job ^_^ |
 kuroxdoragon 2007-04-19 . chapter 1aww, this is soo cute!! ^.^ write more! |
 Lyra Ngalia 2007-04-11 . chapter 1Very cute. Short and sweet, as well as a nice use of repetition. Though it would be a bit easier to read (and neater looking) if it was left aligned instead of centered. |
 Gabunny 2007-04-08 . chapter 1Lol, another wonderful fic. I think it best if I stop reviewing and just favourite all of these ^_~ |
 S J Smith 2007-04-08 . chapter 1Aw, this is very very sweet. Love the repetitive of, "In the morning..." It sets the tone very nicely. |
 I.8023.u 2007-04-03 . chapter 1ohh its so sweet! hehe keep writing! |
 CyanideSamurai 2007-03-31 . chapter 1i like a lot, fluffeh lol |
 ShadowDragon-24 2007-03-30 . chapter 1Aw, so cute! I absolutely loved it, very nicely writ!! |
 ElricKeyblade 2007-03-29 . chapter 1Wow. This is a great oneshot! I am really struck by the simplicity yet sweetness of it all. Great job! Got any more? ;) |
 Bar-Ohki 2007-03-29 . chapter 1That's so sweet. I liked it a lot. |
 Twisha 2007-03-29 . chapter 1Aw, precious EdWin fluff! Love it. I like the way you keep repeating the "he knows she's there" line. It gives it a nice flow. The only thing that I had trouble with is the centering. It throws me off and makes it hard to read. Awesome content though.
(If you could, I would greatly appreciate if you could review my very short fic "Auspicious Beginning" **big puppy eyes**. I really want to hear from authors that I like because this is my very first fic ever and I respect your opinion. It's ok if you don't though; I still like your fic! Disclaimer-I'm putting this request on all of my positive reviews because I want to get better, and this is the best way I can think of. If you already have read it, my most sincere thanks, you rock!) |