 Shannon K 2007-03-30 . chapter 1Wow! There were a lot of emotions that ran through my head as I was reading this. First was I so should not be eating my lunch right now. Second was kind of explicit (but it was rated M for a reason, so I have no quarter here) in some areas, but it wasn't pointless and just there for crudity. Finally, this was a good story and I was quite impressed with the details, especially how you described Silas. Good job.
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