Oh my Gosh! I love this story! Its so cute!

Very cute! You've captures his POV perfectly! :)

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dude that was cool maybe u should write another chapter or something

Hahhahaha that was hilarous! I didn't see it happening that way at all! Great story!

aw so cute loved it!

please continue this story. maybe explain the fight they had, and add a kiss scene.

other than that this is awesome.

That was exceptionally well done. The grammar was good, the spelling was good, no typos, so technically the writing worked well. Beast Boy's thought process overall felt true to character and the thoughts about little Einstein were exactly what he'd think. Raven was in-character with her little monologue and though I didn't expect her to know that BB was hiding in her room, in retrospect it makes perfect sense from a character standpoint. One problem I have is with the last line-"Even if she does love me." That just feels like a massive jump from what she said, even for Beast Boy.

Nitpick: "O boy" should be "Oh boy", usually.

wait, so what te heck happened in the first place?

Good one! I figured she knew he was in her room, that was very funny.

love it!

Aw! That was a really great oneshot!

I was wondering all the way through wether or not she actually knew he was there XD I was in suspense!

Anyway, really great fic *Faves*

LOL! That was fantastic, one of my favourate stories yet! So funny, i was in stitches at the end. Thanks so much for uploading.

-falls over laughing-

That was great. I loved that you did it from Gar's point of view, and based around the pair (

Very, very nice. Its just wonderful. I loved this so much, I just don't have very good words to describe how I feel about it...its just that good. Well, I'm pretty much out of complements (not that you don't deserve them, its just my brain is just not working at the moment), so I'll just stop annoying you by babbling on. Keep up the wonderful work,

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I love it!

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Cause Raven would undoubtedly notice the little green fly buzzing around her.

hehe