man i really don't get it,am i really that stupid?

Wow, that was intense. Great story.

You had me until the dead man bit.
I don't get it, and I know you said not to make sense of it... but i don't get the whole dead thing. How did he die? Or did he die when Star died? I'm so confused!
Oh well. It's very well written.

O...M...G... that's all I wanna say...

awee, your right its hekkuh sad. I love it though. Please continue withthis one shot, it has a wonderful, beginning, shall I say. I love the way you write, especially the intro and the ending. I can't wait to read my stories from you.

CHILLING. Masterfully done. I almost had goosebumps.

Phenominally awesome. Oh, man, that was good. I think I'm trembling. You did really good with that genre. Nice one.

Ja-ne. (I can't wink this time or even end with an explanation mark. That was too soberingly good.) (weak smile)

dude...that was dark...but it was AWESOME!

I loved this. A great look into Robin's thoughts and a wonderful ending.

Oh my gosh! Besides the dieing I love this XP He wasn't afriad to fly but he was afraid to fall I LOOVE THAT! GREAT WORK! YOU ARE SO GOOD! KEEP IT UP!


pLEASE dO nOT rEPLY tO tHIS rEVIEW, eXPLAINATIONS aRE oN mY pROFILE. tHANKS, bYE!

Wowo! Very depressing (in a good way! :D) Definatly enjoyed that!

Love ya!
RoseXThorn