Very wonderful story you have here 3

This was a very good story. I wish that you would add another chapter as a conclusion to Shido's thoughts though.

WOW...this was AWESOME! I LOVED it!

I must admit that I was NOT expecting the twist at the end. I felt sure that Hanae was the Breed (at least, that was the impression I was getting) and what a surprise it was to find out the Breed was Seiichi! What an AMAZING piece of writing! :) VERY VERY VERY Well done! :) I commend you on a fabulous fic! :)

Love the story. It totally rocks

Good . . . good.

Wow. I mean wow.

This is super duper fantasmo.

To the 20th power.

I haven't been able to find any Nightwalker fics worth my time, but this was very good. It stuck to the original story lines and characters marvelously. I'm excited to see what happens next!

EXCELLENT first chapter! Well written, clear and concise descriptions of people, places and things and you hit the nail on the head with the personalities of the characters. Like a fine wine, it has it's own special flavour and I'm enjoying the atmosphere of upcoming horror-you KNOW that something nasty is just around the corner and your excellent writing is pointing very clearly in that direction; we're NOT going to like what comes out of the darkness-that you have so craftily spun.

Can't wait to see chapter 2! Keep up the good work and please update soon!