Woohoo, kinda aangsty, but the ending was happy :]

This is my own opinion but I have to say this is the most creative Aang and katara fanfic I read so far keep up with the good work.

You have a way with words. How you construct the stories, and juxtapose phrases, is brilliant. There were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but your stories are still good. They manage to really show the emotion going on, and what the characters feel. It's very angsty, but somewhat hopeful at the same time.
Well done!

Qi

This is really good! I love the idea of them sneaking from Zuko, so awesome! Very nice writing style too!

You know, I really love this story. :3
It doesn't go in to extreme detail, its just.. lightly suggestive. Thats always my favorite way. Its smuffy, not smutty. Just.. light smut-like-fluff!

Its a great idea, too, Katara taken by Zuko and yet running off with Aang without anyone knowing. It just.. fits.

Love it. Love it so, so much.

DOn't make me write it out again, please. This was definitely a new spin on the concept of this story, and a pleasant one at that. Continue soon!

Big fat ditto from my last review. SO SMEXY I BLUSHED WHEN I READ IT! I should let you know, I won't even be a teenager for 5 more days, so I rarely read M-rated stuff because A) I might get caught and B) the poorly written stuff just creeps me out. But this is so well done that option B is far from my mind. It's more a question of A now, since I have a nosey little sis. So all in all, I hope you continue.

Truly a beautiful chapter in the chronicles of Kataangst. Well-worded and clearly seen in the readers' minds. Overall, a great job!

Awesome fic! Please update! Please! Please!

...Darnit.  When I read the part about the betrothal necklace, I thought AZULA had proposed to her.

...Yeah, okay, I deserve to be shot for that.

I'm such a jerk sometimes.  Anyhow... WOW.  So much Kataangst.  But at least it had a relatively happy conclusion.  ;)  This "forbidden love" theme you've got going on is astonishing.  I noticed you're getting braver with your writing...!  Great job!  You're very good with passionate scenes, you know.

OF COURSE they forgive each other -- their love was meant to be.  ;D

Aww. Please don't keep me waiting long for the next chapter. This is sweet!

You've written this so passionately - every thing you discribe is true to the pure nature of romance; I'm loving it, well done!

Violeteyes92

These are wonderful. So much for the ridiculous myth that Kataang can't be passionate and sexy. And I love the whole Katara cheating on Zuko thing, makes it steamier...LOL (no pun intended)

"A stolen glance, a warm embrace and the most passionate kiss was far more satisfying that hearing three words that anyone can say."

My favourite line of the series so far.

Even though I have already read these chapters before in some probably highly inappropriate msn conversation, they still never cease to absolutely amazing.

Fantastic job as always.

Older!Kataang drabbles, hm?  And so masterfully written!  I wish I'd seen them earlier!

I'm very impressed by your "semi-attempt", as you put it, at smuttage.  It was tasteful.  It was dramatic.  It was passionate on both ends.  Of particular interest was the betrothal necklace Aang carved... and the fact that Katara wears it when they're together to give themselves the sense of authenticity they can never have, due to her marriage of convenience.

"Whenever they were together like this, she always made sure to wear it to capture the illusion that they were free lovers only expressing their right."

Maybe they will be one day...?

Even if not, you capture the Kataangst with fluidity and ease.  The way you write seems so effortless -- and, indeed, you keep them true to character, no matter WHAT the situation.

You always strike a balance between pacing and description.  You have just enough details to paint a vivid picture.  Overkill turns a story dreadfully boring and tedious.  This is a trap you NEVER fall into.

I don't know how you do it.  I guess you have an infinite well of talent that you tap into or something.  ;)