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TMN
2009-11-05 . chapter 32
Aw. I miss this story! Re-reading it for the... bajillionth time. It's a number, it truly is.

I have to wonder if it's been abandoned though! Almost 2010 and not an update since 2008. It makes me sad!

Either way, mucho <3 for it! This story is what started my love for The Twins! They are truly outrageous! :D
Silvera Hikari
2009-10-19 . chapter 32
I absolutely ADORE your definitions of our holidays, because, in all truths... its true. And when you hear it being explained like that, it is absolutely RIDICULOUS! Also, as I was reading it, I imagined all the autobots doing such things. 'Like carving a pumpkin to shoo away Ratchet and the like) Its nearly 2 AM where I am at right now, so I had to cut back on the laughter, otherwise I would wake someone up, but I haven't laughted like that in awhile. So thank you, thank you, for that wonderful laugh.

I noticed that you have not updated this story in a long while. I hope you haven't given up on it, it is absolutely magnificent. But if you are just busy, then I understand. I just hope you finish this story!

Thank you!
Silvera XD
Lin16
2009-10-11 . chapter 32
I adore you and all your writings in this AU.
I'm not sure what i like more, how well you write all the characters or the fun situations you put them in
Pablum
2009-09-20 . chapter 32
Wow. Just wow. I can't believe you've managed to carry this one for so long! Oh, but you haven't updated in nearly a year. Oh, well, it was a good run while it lasted. I love Ms. Hughes, she's an amazing OC and so very believeable.

I love, love, love the realism you've put into this. I adore fanfictions that cover the human aspect of things so honestly and neatly. I don't know why people think that just because it's a fanfiction, you have to skip all the steps to it. There's creative liberty and then there's being lazy.

You've done a spectacular job, and I hope you update!

A fan,
Pablum
fyre
2009-09-07 . chapter 32
I admit to being a bit hesitant in reading this when I saw it had an OC, but I was BLOWN AWAY by how AWESOME your fic is. This is how OC's should be done. No mary sue in sight. Kudos to you for pulling off this great fic. I can't wait to read more and what type of excuse Prowl is going to come up with to justify Evy being gone so many months. Her poor family must be terrified and so worried about her. I loved the talk of holidays, Sides' fear of water, all of it. Great fic.
Trigger
2009-08-31 . chapter 32
Are you dead? -pokes-
vampslayergirl
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
this is a really great story that i started reading and its really great and really good to. and i love it and like it a lot. your a really great author who wrote this really great and wonderful good story.
Jessi Tsuki
2009-08-22 . chapter 32
Ahh I haven't read this in a while, I still love it very much XD Nice to see that maybe Evelyn and Sunstreaker will get along beter.
chaitea16
2009-08-19 . chapter 32
That was so insanely good, really. i mean, the characters were believable and ridiculously well written, the progression of the plot goes from intense to light hearted very well while still flowing and maintaining my interest straight through. Even your OC is very likable and watching the relationships she builds with the characters is a real treat. I could go on about all the scenes that i loved but damn if that wouldn't be almost as long as this story.

Writers block sucks, i know because its the reason most of my store never get posted anywhere. Even still i am immensely thrilled that you writ as much of this as you did. I've noticed that you have come back and posted after long breaks before so i am hopeful that your muse on this hasn't completely died. What you have here is worth waiting for.
mysterious being
2009-08-18 . chapter 32
*reads the announcement* YEY! YEY! Vaeru is coming back along with EVY, SUNNY, SIDES and RATCHET and JACK and.. and JAZZ! and many other lovable characters!THANK YOU! THANK YOU! *glomps* ...although I do admit I WAS getting a little impatient now. I would check your page very now and then to see any updates, only to get my hopes crushed :( But when you said you were gonna get back to writing i practically jumped! I never thought I could smile so big like that while watching the screen. If someone could have seen me, i would probably have scared the shit out of them!

...I shall await for your update...but for now...

*wonders off jumping like a little rabbit*
mysterious being
2009-08-13 . chapter 31
Love this chapter. it gives you that warm kind of feeling, like in anime's, sorry, ^_^ I AM an anime freakaziod, it's like one of those scenes where the background mellows down into warm fuzzy orbs of light and soft music would interject out of nowhere. Those scenes lets you feel the present emotions of the characters, and its either you go all teary eyed or you feel as if butterfly's are fluttering in your stomach, in this case it's both.

It's good to see that evy is starting to understand sunny now, as for me, by far, those two are my favorite, aside from sides. I mean, WHO wouldn't love that red body snatching bot...mech...tehee.

"He doesn’t have anyone else." O_O <--(my reaction, not in a bad way though, more like...WOW) Perhaps, sunny can have someone else now (coughevelyncough) other than his brother. ^_^ It's a very beautiful story, seriously. So, Thank You so much for updating, for your hard work, and probably some sleepless nights you have to spend in order to make this and thanks for giving me such a pleasant and wonderful time reading this story, it was a trip to lala land that i shall never forget.

Hope to hear from you soon.
Honto ni, Arigatou Gozaimasu!
Ja Ne!
Time Manipulator
2009-08-02 . chapter 32
I've pretty much given up on an update so I'll just settle for what I've got here. You've done a wonderful job in characterization and your story is nice and sane. Good work
Brimtayne
2009-07-16 . chapter 32
Wow.

I don't even know how to start off, but I suppose I could begin with: In thirty-one chapters and a prologue you've shown me why I am such a *takes a deep breath* fan..girl.. >.<' *sigh*

Okay, so now I've confessed, I have to tell you that this was/is a wonderful work of characterization, with a refreshingly calm plot. Don't get me wrong- it's not a sleepy story- but its so wonderful to read something with decent length that isn't a maelstrom of angst and tragedy. It is, like you said, a playtime in the Transformers universe, and I'd love for you to continue (even if the last update was last year) 'cause it'd be a shame to let such a wonderful piece of work stay unfinished.

Oh- and your OC? I don't want to her to die in a freak accident, so props for that!
EagleBlaze
2009-07-15 . chapter 32
I really am enjoying this story so far! Though one thing that I am confused on is what unvirse that you are writting in, lol.

I enjoy reading the interaction between Evelyn and the Autobots (especially her and Sunny :-)).

Keep up the very good work and I hope that you update soon!

EagleBlaze954
lilies
2009-07-11 . chapter 32
wah! i love it! this is probably the first transformer fic that i have read, for now, that had had some back-bone to it. You gotta update soon. It's wonderful, well, then again you probably have heard that a couple of times now. But, I guess it just goes to show how much your story rocks! So...yeah. That's about it. Anyways...plz update soon! Chow for now!
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