AH!! i just found this story by way of refrence, read it all up to this point just to find out you STOPPED!! you. must. CONTINUE!! please! its funny and i love sideswipe!

Go, Evy! Go!

Finally, Ratchet gets called on the proverbial carpet for his behavior. The big lug means well, but it's past time he got a good dressing down. And it was lovely to see!

You know, the "wrench throwing" Ratchet is slightly more fanon than canon, but I wonder if people ever stop to wonder about the implications such a thing would have for Cybertronian philosophy/psychology/ethics/etc. that their equivalent of a doctor could get away with physically abusing his patients on a regular basis.

And Evy's explanation of human holidays? Bwahahahahaha! There was a quote on a post about Anonymous' protests of Scientology.

"They could withstand the fiecest of our weapons, they could defeat us intellectually, but in the end, I think they died of sheer culture shock."

Sounds rather like how Evy won this round. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wonderful story! Can't wait for more!

Wow~! I mean, frag it to the Pit, I have never found a fan fiction quite like this one! I'm completely and utterly in love with your definitions of the characters, so in-character and absolutely lovable.

And, I almost couldn't believe it, Sunshine comes across as a huge teddy bear. I mean, that's a bit mental when one really thinks about it, but it's like he's lost and just wants to get the frag out of this slaggin' mess.

I'm addicted to Evelyn and your writing. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us and them.

Cheers,
Figs

Very good chapter!

“Chocolate, Jazz. Lots and lots of chocolate.”

...xD Oh, God. Nice. I keep re-reading this story and I swear...it keeps getting better. Great new chapter. It made me grin like a little kid. x3

The Evy vs. Ratchet showdown was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I LOVE seeing Evelyn standing up to Ratchet like that, finally taking some power back. She's so cool when she's like that!

Sunny...hm, he didn't say a single word. Oddly, I find that rather telling about what he thinks. He reminds me a little of my older brother: ignore what he says, just pay attention to what he *does*.

I feel happy that Evy's going to get some long-awaited treats, like chocolate and shampoo!

I'm so glad to see you've come back. It makes me all happy and fuzzy inside! :D

I can never get enough Jux... loved her tantrum - and that she'd have the guts to take on *Ratchet*? - Inferno & Jazz' reaction = win!

god, being that close to home and not being able to go there? that would drive me absolutely nuts. I'd try to find a way to hitch a damn ride. LOL

so good to hear more from you!! and that sudden jolt of human culture was hilarious! (heck, i'm from north america and even i admit our customs are weird)

loved it and can't wait to see more!!

Love it, as always. Jazz and Chocolate...Jazz bringing chocolate...what more could a girl ask for? Not much. :) well done!

YAY! YOU UPDATED! XD

I'm so glad to see a new chapter; I've been dying to read more, and you delivered in an awesome way!!

M, chocolate.
I like watching Ratchet trying to keep his volume to non-damaging decibels.
I think Prowl might be okay as the second chaperone as well. He did successfully face off against Sunstreaker, and seems pretty good in a fight.
Glad to see you're not dead ;)

Chocolate, Ben and Jerry's, and a good movie.
Ah, bliss.
Throw in a nice big comforter and some popcorn, you've made my day.