actually it is pretty good...the title doesn't have to exactly match the story...afterall they did meet at the bar...while Dai is dancing exotically...anyways please update soon...I can't wait to read your next chapter :)

Thank you for being nice enough t tell us this information ,sadly, I don't have anything.So I didn't pm you, sorry if I'm bothering you..

ah daisuke!! go get him dark damn it, don't let diasuke go byebye! no poor dai! >

aww... Go Dark! Go Toshi! Go Krad! You can do it! Save Dai-chan!

I soo can't wait for more ^_^

I just love Krad's sarcasm. And Dark's childish behavior(is that the right spelling?). Nekorb is like Second Hand of Time version two.. Kinda? Oh well. Poor Dark. I think he's drowning in guilt. Keep writing. x]

Nekorb is eevill-hiss-and you are too for making me suffer, waiting...for...umm... I got nothing but the suspense is killing me!! If there is any that is...Well buh-bye for now cause I have nothing to say

OMG! After all that time...you. I mean...what did you... I'm speechless! The next one need to be longer and more action packed. We need them!

awesome chapter. this story is getting pretty exciting, and now i cant wait to see the next chapter.

EEP!! I know what Nekorb is, but I'm not going to say it here. Cause that would spoil it for everyone else. XP Can't wait for the next chappy!

BRotFM

Uah! I'm addicted to this story! Uah! Please write more! ...Yes, I know, hyperactive. But... UAH!

No, I'm not psychic, just anal retentive to detail. Once my mind gets a hold of something, it never lets go...ever.
Very suspenseful. I'm really enjoying this.

I've read all of your works, and I must say, they have plotlines with interesting twists. They're not the sterotype fanfics that you find on this site, leaning a little to the dark side. You have a way of making things dramatic without crossing the boudaries of reality. ^^ Keep up the good work!
PS: I really enjoyed your different perspectives in your fanfics, though I'm too lazy to review all your stories, I thought they were great ^^

Waah! Next chapter must come soon! But, I was just noticing. In one of the chapters before this (I'm just not reviewing it because I'm lazy) when Daisuke and the others was introducing theirselves, Daisuke said a whole sentence in japanese, but he said 'Watashi wa Daisuke Niwa'. Aren't japanese people usually saying their last name first? Just thought I'd say it. Great fic, though. Keep writing.

Aww, so cute! I'm happy that you even include his wings, actually. I mean, so many people have been writing this pair and completely leaving out the ever-important Red Wings! Of all things to leave out, that is not one I want to leave. Of course, I cried with Satoshi and Dark even with the simple message of Daisuke's words, as I know what it's like to be on both the depressed end and the consoling end of words like that. I hope to see you again soon.

And about the name - Actually, the name has no meaning that I know of. It comes from a manga called Whistle! about a boy named Shou Kazamatsuri that is so passionate about soccer that he changed from the best school in the area to one of the lower class schools whose soccer team never wins more than two matches in the regional tournament. But the problem is - he really sucks. The teacher only sees the school he came to, however, and doesn't realize that he was a third-tier substitute, and says to the team, instead, that he's a regular. Thus they play a game and he loses miserably. Instead, he trains alone for a few days almost non stop and wears himself out. The story has more from here, but you'll have to read to find out.

Aww, poor Dai-kun! I want to hug him and never let go. *dissolves into uncontrollable sobbing*

BRotFM