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| jupitersthunder 2008-05-11 ch 22, | abuseNO!! DON'T LEAVE THEM IN A ROOM ALONE TOGETHER! PLEASE! lol. Anyways great chapter. please update soon! |
| Baughn 2008-05-10 ch 22, | abuseThe universe would be ruined beyond repair, and then Washu would repair it anyway. She /is/ one of its creators, after all - she ought to know how it's put together. :P Hm. So Lina can regenerate a lost hand in a few seconds, but takes a night to fix bruises and scratches? That doesn't really make sense.. how much damage could she regenerate anyway? Masu were shown to be pretty much structureless, able to regenerate even if you cut off their heads, limbs, and for good measure put the rest through a shredder. Lina, being at least partially human, probably isn't at /that/ level - but given that you're not planning to kill her off yet we'll never find out unless she is, so would it be okay to tell me? :) |
| Princess Asuna 2008-05-10 ch 22, | abuseanother great chapter usagi-chan i cant wait to read the next ones. I was also randomly thinking and thought i would suggest a few sceens i thought would be funny. why not take nashigi gosaria and hermione along with lina to mou i am sure they would find it interesting, plus a certain bushy browed girl would probably be hyper as a chipmunk at visiting another planet. i also thought it would be funny if say lina visited pluto again and during said visit linas favorite (yeah right lmao) outfit the sailor pompom fuku suddenly appeared on her |
| al103 2008-05-10 ch 5, | abuse>“Grandma Washu doesn’t though, momma.” >“GRANDMA!?” Washu yelled in shock and indignation. She wasn’t old enough for that yet. Mwuhahahahahahahaha! Washu, be patient and be happy that Mihoshi didn't start that! She is your great-great-granddaughter, you know! And in nowels she called you at least grandmother (and may be more) at least once! |
| Bobboky 2008-05-09 ch 22, | abusevery good |
| al103 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseI disagree with Asgerdas comment on "Washu has no love interest in Tenchi". IIRC from info from the creator of tenchiverse first child of Tenchi will be from Washu, or at at least second... |
| Smiffy 2008-05-09 ch 22, | abuse*insert review here* |
| TJG 2008-05-09 ch 22, anon. | abusePlease disregard my earlier comment about Lina Inverse's plans, as it appears upon further reading that she came from a "merchant" family (albeit a magical one of some sort) rather than having it be her retirement plans. I still do not think that she should become an Auror as it ties her too much to paperwork and a government. Being a free-lance warder, curse breaker, magic researcher, magic item maker, etc. would give her more freedom of movement. If she needs to do investigations, maybe she can be a freelance reporter for the Quibbler. Is Sailor Pom-Pom really bound to Queen Serenity? She never really gave an oath as far as it is known and both Sailor Pom-pom and Queen Serenity regarded it as a cruel joke. So she is unlikely to have ever transformed after that, which explains why the transformation pen was left in storage. I wonder when Ranma will realize that the masu evolving feature requires Genma level stupid training and his reaction to it. |
| Asgeras 2008-05-09 ch 22, | abuseDo you mind if I declare my undying love to you? (I joke, I joke) Seriously, though, I forgot how fun this fic is. I love how you're bringing everything together and am definitely looking forward to the next chapter. I also love the fact that despite having such a super powered Ranma, you still give him/her foibles, ranging from being bad with expressing emotions to having senshi powers which are completely worthless (well, besides a possible disguise field and the possibility of providing some extra durability to Ranma). Now, on to other matters. The one thing which I didn't particularly care for is that the whole Nodoka scenario has been left unresolved. I just don't envision that Ranma would leave things sit and stew for a whole year before talking to Nodoka again, so I hope to see a scene about said conversation prior to Ranma leaving for Mau. Of course, the choice is yours, but I thought I would at least express my opinion. Thanks again for the wonderful fic. Now...bed, here I come. Until next update, ja ne. |
| Wolvenstrom 2008-05-09 ch 22, | abuseVery good story. I've been reading it since the first draft, this version is even better than the last one. The only thing I don't like in this story is that all the other charecters seem to always gang up on her. |
| Anonymous 2008-05-09 ch 22, anon. | abuseFirst off...I think the idea of having some of the best geniuses in anime meet each other in a room is a wonderful idea. Second, I really liked this chapter. It's quite a long one you know? I hope you update faster and may God bless you! |
| Dax 2008-05-09 ch 22, anon. | abuse:-). |
| Asgeras 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseOnce again, an interesting little chapter with more than a bit happening within. I think I've probably mentioned it before, but I kind of like the idea of Ranma being paired with Washu. She's one of the few Tenchi cast members which hasn't really shown a romantic interest in Tenchi (interest? yes. romantic interest? no). Plus, I just like her character. True, she has her odd quirks, but I guarantee everyone would have their odd quirks after living for so long. Oh, and being a Goddess might have something to do with it as well. :P That being said, if you do go this route I still hope that they don't actually do anything (aka, anything to hardcore, such as...well...you know, or marriage) until Ranma's at least sixteen. I understand that he's quite a bit older mentally, but that still doesn't change his current physiology (note: I'm using masculine pronouns since that's the way Ranma views himself currently, and it looks like Ranma will, indeed, find a way to return to being male, at least part-time, within the next few years). But enough about that... I like how Ranma was introduced to Makoto. It will be interesting to see how he interacts with all of the Senshi. And that's about it for now. Thanks for the update and onward ho! |
| Asgeras 2008-05-09 ch 20, | abuseDang...I almost completely forgot about this fic. Which is sad, since I like it so much. Then again, that just means there's more for me to read for now. Bwahaha. You definitely had some interesting stuff happening in this chapter. One of the things I liked in particular was Ein. I don't know if this is what you intended, but Ein sure as heck reminds me a lot of Luna-P and I could easily see Ein as a prototype of said product/companion. Just a thought. No matter what, though, I hope to see Ein in the future. If nothing else, I think Hermione would absolutely love her (him?). I also like the relationship you've been developing between Narcissa and Ranma. Although I don't like Narcissa too much as a person, she's not all that bad, once you get to know her. I hope to see her good qualities improve further. And that's about it for now. I'm still loving the fic and am definitely looking forward to the next couple of chapters. So, onward ho! |
| TJG 2008-05-09 ch 22, anon. | abuseAs a thought, couldn't Ranma or Washu just make things for the space ships to eat and incorporate into themselves? This could include power systems, propulsion, weapons, defenses and armor, sensors, etc. Ranma might want to become as far as the wizardling world is concerned a curse breaker or even a maker of magic items. I am not sure, but didn't Lina Inverse at one point plan on being a magic item merchant in the future? Maybe Ranma could take up similar studies and make things for Laira to eat like powerful warding systems. |