Great job on the revisions! I’ve been keeping track of them on 'Fukufics dot com' and I especially like the new side stories. I can't wait to find out what happens in side story 3 ^_^

Great stuff. I can only pray that you continue this sometime soon.

I find it refreshing that you have multiple pairings set up. The Washu/Lina pairing is the most obvious, but, whether intentional or not, you have dropped hints here and there that a Hermione/Lina pairing is possible. I'm kinda miffed that this is as far as you have gone so far, but I look forward to the next one eagerly. +Fav and alert

This is a touching chapter. I like how you slowly opened the door for Narcissa to become a better person. I also like how you dropped a little foreshadowing in there for Ranma/Lina to have a severe dislike of Lockhart, which will in turn lead her to be suspicious of him, same as Quirrel.

Hahahaha, "I’m so innocent and cute that I could give you cavities", I'll have to use that sometime. ROFL, Barnie is used as a torture device. I won't ask how she got a hold of that recording.

Perhaps a cask of Nannichuan? Or maybe a library full of technique scrolls. If she saw that, she could go to the room of requirement and ask it to turn into that. Perhaps it would show her and the Malfoys as a loving family. Wouldn't it be heart breaking if it showed what Lina Inverse would have most wanted, Gourey? Speaking of Gourey, is Gosaria his reincarnation?

Does that mean you are going to pair Ranma with girl? I mean, it's all very forward thinking and all that rot, but I don't know how some of the more...straightlaced teachers, not to mention Draco, would react.

Great story... with the potential to be truly epic-length seeing only the first year at Hogwarts has been covered so far. I truly hope it hasn't been abandoned as looks to be the likely case from how long ago the last update was :(

great story hurry up with the next chapters i cant wait till ranma gets to mau

The story is great, and I'm really looking forward to what happens in second year.

I hope that neither this story nor Take the Green and Go are finished, because both have great potential and I'd love to see where they wind up.

Wildly funny story, can't wait to you post the next chapter.

fantastic story

Nice, hope you're still working on it.

One thing, though. I know it's a minor detail, but since Ranma grew up apart from Draco, consider the possibility of the Westermarck Effect not taking, well, effect. That'd be pretty hilarious. And creepy. But that should be par for the course for Ranma.

Dude, this is a really, REALLY, good story. Aside from Ranma being almost totally female, I can deal with seeing as how Ranma is trying her best to get back to being male. I mean, Ranma isn't Ranma if he isn't able to change between genders. At least, that's the way I see it, not to mention with Ranma's whole patented chaos factor. Anyhow, I hope you'll be able to get this up and get alot of updates to where the latest Harry Potter movie or, hell, the whole book series id done. Well, I hope you update soon, ja ne.

Not bad. Loved the humor. But it seems to be based on the movies, which I felt were decidedly below par. Other than that it was a good chapter. I'm also glad to see that you managed to improve some of your grammar and spelling problems.