i wish you had kept going! you have had nothing but good feedback! if you ever get writers block or something, you should come back and finish this fic! it was cute!

Sounds like me the other day. Good story, hope you plan to update.

Just so you know code for a DB is a 419

Nice banter between everyone. Although I think it's cute to compare Nick to a sleeping kid in a moving car, I somehow don't think he would appreciate it. *grin*

Funny and cute, looking forward to the next chapter.

Good but very short. Be nice and update hurry, ok?

I got a feeling about Sara is up too something. I think she's going to put benadryl in his drink to knock him out. Boy, she is better run if he wake up from his sleep, he will give her the evil look. Hurry back, I can't wait what you got plan for him.

*dreamy sigh* I love Nick...I love sick Nick...he's slick, even when he's a "sick Nick"

*laughs*

Oh Nick...he makes me rhyme. Uh oh, I'm outta time!

I like the way the story is heading. The only thing I can really comment on at this time is the fact that your chapters are VERY short. They really need to be at least double their current size, preferably about 4 times bigger. In short chapters, there is barely time for the characters to say 'hello' when the chapter is ending, which is very disappointing. So, having said that...longer chapters please? lol.

Please continue soon.

A great chapter, i wonder if he will collapse at the crimescene or just be real grumpy all the way through hehe, looking forward to the next chapter!

By all means continue. This is a cute beginning. No pairings please. I don't understand why everyone is always wanting to pair them all up. Just leave them as good friends and co-workers.

Hm, I love a nice bit of Nick whumping, by all means, please continue. As for pairings? Personally, I'm not a fan of any of them that aren't in the actual TV series, I'm not big on 'mushy stuff', lol. Just good friendship does it for me.

Snickers. :-) continue, but where are you taking this, my curiousity tells me you should write more. :-)

Very interesting. Ok, I confess I'm a lover of good Nicky angst. Go ahead. About pairings? What about started with GSR (I'm not on it but I agree it must had happened) then step by step turning to NS? Update soon!

i like it. nicks my favorite character so i'll definitely read more. as for pairings i love sara/nick.