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| Patty 2007-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh please, you really must add at least a bit more to this. It's too good and really, really different. Yes, we do forget that Charlie is a teacher and not just a brilliant mathematician. He relates well to young people (i.e. he and Oswald Kitner). Maybe you could add more by his seeing a glimmer of interest in one of the student's eyes or possibly someone could ask an intelligent question, making him think that that particular person was finally "getting" it. With your busy schedule I can understand if you stop the story here, but please, at least consider adding a few more paragraphs. I'm beggin' . . . . LOL |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute! |
| luvnumb3rs 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseiT WAS A GOOD LITTLE FIC |
| jlm110108 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! It sounds like Charlie needs to use some of the ideas from his article to liven up this bunch of 8:00 zombies! I had a physics professor who taught what we jokingly called "Physics for Artists" ("The Physics of Light and Color," offered so we art majors could meet our science requirement). You could tell he absolutely hated the class and considered it a waste of his time. Not surprisingly, we had the same opinion of the class! Jo |