Beautiful end. I love the wedding and medals. So John skipped the rank of Colonel? I also love him teasing her at the Eiffel. Sequels please?

I love John skateboarding through the empty city. So him. Outwardly little-boy-like but with a dark, conflicted and brave core. The explanation totally works. I don't want this to end. Sequels please? John talking to his ancestors on the Mist world? What a child of two superheroes to use John's terminology will be like? More of the Earth and military reactions and returning to the city?

SO cool. That explains why John could manipulate their illusions from the very beginning. I love John's resolution.

What a twist. Great plotting.

The mist people were fascinating. I am glad you are using them. Teyla's comforting of John and his protectiveness and vow were lovely. I also love his crack about the 92 seconds to assemble.

So cool. I love your use of genetic memories in this story.

The resolutions are great and show a lot about them as does John's fierce protection of Teyla.

The skittles are funny. I think they've driven her around the bend. I love mass chaos event. Creative and cool.

Now I am really confused. Did they or didn't they? I love the suspense and the team frantically working together.

Did John and Teyla already hook up between the last two chapters and that is why they now know everything the other does? I am confused. Still I love their connection, the idea of the High Queen and Rodney, Radek and Keller's game to confuse the Asurans.

I love the part with John threatening to kill himself to save Teyla and Rodney's making Keller pretend to be a scientist. At least the Replicators will fix the city. Really suspenseful chapter.

Wha a cliffhanger! Those darn Replicators... I can't wait for more John and Teyla. Great job.

I love how you play out the drama of John's confrontation with the Wraith queen and raise as many new questions as you answer. Great building of suspense.

SO it was Teyla? Sneaky. The queen seems way too interested in John. Great job writing Rodney's freak outs, Teyla's calm and John's deep trust in her. So does her kissing him meaning she is acknowledging her feelings for him?

So many questions. What is a shadow wraith? Who is sabotaging the wraith ships? I love how you show Teyla is anchored and protected by her bond with John and his embrace. Beautiful.