Hey! You need to work on this! I've been trying to find a story like this for AGES! Link/Krystal seem pretty cool together...

Hey...could I work on it? My outcome might be alot different than what you might have wanted though...

Thankz!

~Vaskira

This story is looking very good.
I hope that you keep it going.

Well, well. Very nice. I appreciate the mention in the disclaimer. Its been awhile sense I graced the reviews column. The story is going good. Nice touch with the the inclusion of midna. Keep up the good work.

Zelda and Starfox x-over lol! can't wait to see what's next!
There is nothing wrong with your writing style i donno why eople keep on complaining about it. There is no spelling mastakes ( I donno if there is im a bbaadd speller XD)
But Love it!_! :D

This is an interesting concept having Krystal and Link teaming up. Will there be more?

This is better than your original version. I've noticed more description and action, which I'm sure is a result of your rewriting. Unfortunately, I've got some issues with the remake, which won't be that difficult to fix.

Firstly, mind your grammar. I noticed multiple typos, misspellings, and other errors. Make sure you proofread really carefully! Remember that grammatical errors make your story look unattractive and readers won't want to keep reading.

Secondly - you might want to add a bit more character description. In the beginning of this chapter, you introduced Krystal, Fox, Falco, and Slippy as if the reader already has a good idea as to who they are. Since this is FanFiction, readers already know who the characers are. But, it adds much more depth to your story if you introduce the characters one-by-one and really explain who they are and what they look like. Attaching the reader to the characters is a really important aspect in any story, regardless of who the characters are.

I would suggest to work on the early bit of this story a little more. The last half of the story, however, is very well done. Good usage of mild humor, and the suspence that you created as well. If anything, you might want to add a bit more description as to what the new area of space looks like that the team warped to in oder to escape Wolf. Also, I see you've chosen to use LOZ: Twilight Princess in this story. One word of caution: many people have yet to play the game (i.e., ME!), so NO SPOILERS!

Overall, this a great start. Keep up the good work! Mind the grammar and description, and this will turn out to be an awesome remake. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Oh, and thanks for recommending my story. It's much appreciated!

I like your style, please continue this.

Hm...it's much better Link. Much better. No more of the crappy lines *shudders*

I can't wait to see what kind of impression Link and Midna (oops, did I give it away? XD) will get when they meet Krystal. Ohh...I can't wait!

Update this much sooner than you plan too!

Good to see you rewrote the first chapter and got rid of those terrible lines.