haha! really cute :).

XO omgomgomg so hot! XD

Whoo LOVELOVELOVE! This is utterly-butterly adorable!!

oh, i feel some SMUT coming on :D

Sequel please!

WHAT CAN HE THINK OF? WHAT CAN HE THINK OF?!??!?!?!
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Very cute, I like how this is going so far. ^^ Write the next chap please. ^w^

love the dynamic! and oh, your imagery KILLS me!

as gloved hands move and direct the raindrops, conducting them this way and that until spirals of water arc through the sky in musical patterns and crescendos only Demyx can hear.

*sigh*

*laughs* Ok, I officially love Zexion here. Demyx too, but especially Zexion. He's just...cool, without being made of ice. And Demyx's little outburst (or whatever I should call it) was nice too.

Yay! Zemyx that isn't with emo Zexy and crack fulled Demyx (no man can be so happy with nothing in him)
I love this so much! I personally think Demyx is so much fun in this.

I love the ending X3

Sorry I couldn't think of anything smart to say 8D

I can't really sum it up, but in so few words, that was remarkable.

Yeah, that´s right, give Demyx some attitude! In most fics, he´s like a high school student with a secret crush or something. So that´s way to go!! Great fic ;)

Fantastic. That reaction was just so purely...Demyx. And I liked Zexion's response even more--not caring in the least. I honestly think that would have been just what Zexion would have done. Wonderfully written, ADORABLE story line; I absolutely loved it!!

~Jessie

Aww, this was cute. I love how you captured Demyx's mischevious side, and how it brought out Zexion's humor as well.

You're high on my list for favorite Zemyx one-shots. Absolutely lovely. Oh, now you make me want to look up at that song by the Corrs.

This is so dreamy and beautiful. :) These two are absolutely lovely together. And it made me listen to a certain song by the Corrs.

"-- droplets of water jump from Demyx’s limp hair onto Zexion’s cheekbones, painting an absurd facsimile of tears." Now that was poetically beautiful. I read through it several times.

And the Demyx pout is lovely when not overused (like Axel's catchphrase) and you used in just the right place.

aw, that's sweet :3 uber sweet... and funny. i would like to see get Zex drenched one time :)
very nice job