Ahh Yeah i love this story. Please update soon.

OMG... you better update again soon! more quifer moments please... LOLz

Wow, i am very impressed with this story!
I read all today in one single sit, and now i want to read more. so pleas update soon. I really want to find out what happend to Quistis and the rest others.

OMG why is there no more chapters?? What happenes to Quistis? please keep writing, this is an awesome spin off :)

i love this novelization.
please update soon.

this is so exciting!! Please keep it going! I can't wait to see what happens to all of them!!
Great job@!

You know, maybe I'm a little sick, but I liked the torture bits in this chapter. Maybe too much. I could see every jerk and every twitch and I loved all of it.

Now, let's find out what's happening with Quistis, shall we?

Well done. Seifer's jokes make for amusing reading.

Oh man awesome story. I can't wait to read what happens next. How is D-District Prison going to play out with Seifer as a prisoner? I wonder.

Dude, I cheered when I received an email that you had updated! Awesome chapter! Glad you're back at it, and glad that this story isn't on hiatus!

Very original idea...and lots of fun to read...

Keep it up!

OH MY GOD! You updated! I don't fucking believe it!

Thank you so much! Still love this fic and I'm very glad to see an update!

Love this chapter. Love, love, love this chapter. Especially since it hints at Quistis' blue magic (which the damned game didn't explore at all)

"I am a god among insects!" Poor Q. Through the whole game I always had the impression that she tried so hard, but never received the proper recognition for her work. I really, really liked this line...seems like the sort of thing a girl would say if she tasted power that had always been denied her.

Update soon! I'll look forward to it!

I am willing to beg, you know. No shame at all. Update? Please? PLEASE!

I know its been a couple years since the last update, but I'm really hoping this story isn't dead.

so does this mean that this fic is dead? cause I really liked it. quistis is hot anyway so it's cool to read something like this. different than the rest of the romantic stuff out there:)

What happened with this? You were doing a wonderful job. This fic is even more interesting than the game itself; to have Seifer inside the party is just so great and funny, and Quistis could be an amazing enemy. I hope you continue this, I'd love to see Quistis in the evil side; she has so much potential wasted... (Square's fault).