Why didn't you continue? D: It was such a good story too! If you have time in the future, or maybe right now *winkwink*, please please please continue! I loved it so much! It's so hard to find fanfictions with a great story line and immaculate grammar! Oh, I really do hope you continue this!

... im going to cry. . . i rly liked this story. . . .(now drowning in a pile of tears)

ooooh my god! and it was getting good too!
Is it possible for you to pick it up again and continue? , pretty please..

WTF?!

that's all i can say, really... i will be "patiently" waiting for the updates... "if" there are any... :(

still, awesome story, deserves more reviews... Natsume's hot! *ahem* and you're cool... xD

-Raven

aww stupid virus i wanted to read more well it was good enough for what was left 3

Oh. I like the story...but it turns out be incomplete. I feel disappointed. But I can say, you did a good job.

Take this as a friendly advice. Try to complete all your stories next time.
Reader,
jhae

I go back to this story and wonder, WHY ISNT IT FINISHED! wahhhhhh :3 I'm still hooked on the plot you made for this fanfic, even if you dont return to this and continue, i'll be waiting for any new stories of yours! :D

I wish you would finish the story... D:
Its really GOOD. I wish I read it when you didn't re-do it...

GLOB IT ALL! *ragequit* :P

I know you've quit (quite a few times, in fact) and I'm not sure of the chances of you seeing this, but do you possibly still have the original copy of this story before you took it down for revision? It's been about 5 years since you wrote the story so you might not even have it any more, but I do think it's a little bit of a shame some people, like myself, never got to finish the whole story. (only a little bit of a shame. i mean, this is fanfiction of all places!)

what the hell. here i am just getting in the groove of this fic and this is what i read... r u still going to revise this cuz it's already march and it seems like u already quit fanfiction... if u don't fell like revising any can u please post the otiginal then so at least i would know what will happen next.

I hope you'll still continuing revising and posting the rest of chapters even though you said in your profile that you are "moving on" from fanfiction world (I'm sorry if I misunderstood it). I hope you put up the older chapters if you didn't continue the revising, that way I know how the story ended.

Thank you for writing this good and well written fanfic. I hope I can see your original fiction/story in the bookstores soon :)

What the hell? I just started reading this and then when I got to ch.11 I was like WTF!

So are you gonna continue reposting this.. please I am now hooked with the story pretty pretty please...

I'm not much into adventure stories but I rally adore this please

are you still going to post the missing chapters? pls. continue this!

what happen to ch11 to 20? pls post it asap after u revise! o

could do with a summary:) o