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| scott pike 2008-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseplease continue. |
| Dax 2008-05-06 ch 2, anon. | abuse:-). |
| danyman 2008-04-26 ch 2, anon. | abusegood but for the next update don't make us wait a year |
| Dax 2008-04-24 ch 2, anon. | abuse:-). |
| New lord of darkness 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseUPDATE! ( iw ould say some more unpleasent words to describe the way its hanging right now, but i wont) Just Update and i will review each and evary chapter when i get the chance to read it. |
| The Mad shoe1 2008-04-18 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was just so sad, i almost started to cry at the part where Megumi went to check out Keiichi's corpse. Well done, i can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Zaya Ayame 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseA master peice! That's what you've got here! Not only did you create the perfect plan, but you created the Mistress Hild would. Once again, I say that this is a masterpeice and you are a geniius! ^^ I look forward to the next chapter so update soon, but take your time! ^^ |
| Spiritblade 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseI'd been waiting for ages to see an update for this story. Thanks, SimmyC. And it stayed good to the plot too. Now...let's see where it goes. |
| Starfire99 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseGreat story! Though I hope you will be updating it much more often than once a year. |
| Sentiment Remains 2008-04-01 ch 2, | abuseWow this story falls under GREATNESS!! I can't believe how much depth you've put into Keiichi's death, let alone all the emotion that runs through it. GREAT WORK! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Tuisto 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseThis is a very good update. You really conveyed the sadness of everyone that knew K1 quite well, and Belldandy... poor poor Bell... At the end I especially like Hild tempting Urd. And of course you've put K1 into shock, death not really sinking in yet, and all that. Like I said before, I -really- like storied that feature Hild as an active character, and so far you're pulling it of. I look forward to how this goes from here. Thanks. |
| scott PIke 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. Dark and serious. Few have the good ideas to write good serious stories and continue them. Please continue. Where will it go from here? Also Please finish and don't leave us hanging. |
| Wonderbee31 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseVery sad here, and very interesting as well, and going to be keeping an eye on what all Bell might be gearing up to do, as well as how Urd will deal with this temptation as well, and how things go down at the funeral and afterwards at the temple. |
| Arnoldstrife 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseHey welcome back! it's been an er... Long time! Glad for the update, I really would like to see this fanfic, HildK1 seems like a very unique concept! and so far it has been developing well. Good job! Actually I really want to see your other AMG and Fallen Blade fanfics too. You are a really good writer, just take it one story at a time so you don't overwork yourself. Relax and have fun with it! |
| Mr.Evil 2008-03-29 ch 2, anon. | abusewow ur still alive |