I loved the end. It made me laugh, well, chuckle a little anyway.

I have to agree with you about the roses; it does seem a little...repetative. But to each his own I suppose. Plus I did like seeing the different things they could represent.

Aw, I loved it! It was so cute!

DO A PART TWO DO A PART TWO! PLEASE MY DEAR IT WOULD ME A CRIME IF YOU DIDN'T!

AW DO A CHAPTER TWO ON THAT ONE PLEASE!

SO CUTE!

OH THE TEARS OF JOY WON'T STOP FALLING! OH GOD THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!

BRAVO MY DEAR BRAVO!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

That was not bad at all, and I'm not lying. It was sad. I am almost in tears. This was a beauiful story and you should be proud of it.

It wasn't bad, and don't you dare tell me I'm lying because I don't lye as rule. It was just sad. Vey sad actually. Seriously, I'm almost in tears here.
So, while I freely admit it is not my favorite out of the bunch, it's not bad. Just a little depressing.

...Did you just say the first one sucked? It so did NOT suck. Anyway, this is a story that I simply loved. It was really good and yes, perhaps, her name doesn't fit her so well.

On the point of veiw issue...well, I love Hiei's point of view and Botan's and even third person. It really doesn't matter to me. Either way, I'm going to be reading them. You should write in what you feel most comfortable or in what it needs. Like this one had to be in Hiei's point of view or it wouldn't have seemed right.

Anyway, keep them coming! I love your stories!

Wow, that was...wow.
Yeah, I have a way with words, eh? Anyway, beautiful. I loved. I know, not a lot to go on, but there really are not words capeable of describing just how wonderful it really was.
Ok, 1)The first one did NOT suck. I think I told you that already.
2)Personally, I like Hiei's POV. I don't know, I just like seeing what goes on in his head, for lack of a better term. But Botan is also a interesting character that you could do a lot with.
Well, I suppose that was no help at all. Heh, heh.

aw i think this story is cute. i like it. and i can just see hiei picking through clovers looking for one with four leaves. quite funny.
lol now i see him with botan and botan found one and he didn't and got angry.

Haha, I can just picture Hiei rummaging around through the grass looking for a four-leafed clover. It takes a minute, but once you get there, it's one of the funniest things I've ever seen!
And, Hiei helping Botan find one is just too sweet for words.

AH!! That was so cute. *giggles* He just had to, didn't he? Haha! I loved it. Keep them coming. Oh, by the way, congratulations on breaking your pattern!

I think you gotta work on the dialogues.. Other than that its great, I guess. ^^