oh my god it was perfect so sad but very good it was beautiful!

I loved it even though it was really sad.

It's so sad but it's amazingly written!
Very good one-shot

Intense. Whoa. Good, but very, very intense.

This was great. I loved it! Really emotional - you did a wonderful job portraying what they were going through! Keep up the great work!

-angel6

a very sad shot but a lovely story. its so booth and bones.

I enjoy all you're bones stories.

look forward to more

so sad!

I thought it was nice. You made me cry.
It was a bit long for s song fic, I was trying to play the song and read at the same time and I think I listened to the song four and half times, which generally isn't the best thing to do with a song fic, but I still think it was really nice.
The only thing I didn't like was the phone, if someone's daughter had died somebody besides a teacher probably would've have called and asked them to come down to the hospital or whatever because there's been an emergency.
You did great though. Nice story, very sad.

Aw, that was so sad! It was very beautiful though. I almost cried when I read it.
~shadow~

What are you doing? OH MY GOD! Heartbreaking!! But I will totally read more!! :)