OMG HAHAHAHA this is so cute :D

that was really fantastically good and i think you ended it in just the right place. and the last few lines really made me hold my breath. which might sound slightly weird, but i hope that was what you wanted the reader to do :)
bravissimo!!

that was so cuute.

WHY'D YOU STOP THERE? NO I NEED TO KNOW MORE! AH

gorgeous!
simple, beautiful and very cute.
loved it.
Ash x

Haha, this reminds me of one time, at band camp... oh, don't look at me that way-- I'm being serious! Anyway, surely that's not the end! Surely there's more! I demand more awkwardness! Please? Cute!
FM

yes it is beautiful...and very awkward...LOVED IT!! :D

just lovely!
but... for me it's sad! =( [It's not sad!... u_u Stupid boys!!]
Keep on writting!! xD
Kisses
Lalwens

Wow. :) I loved it. I can see it all starting from there. It's also realistic and unique from most fics. It's not the usual "Her sparkling emerald eyes gazed at me, and I just couldn't help not looking away..." blah blah blah stuff that is starting to sicken me. xD

I really liked this. :)

Facinating fic - I really enjoyed reading your unique characterizations of Oliver and Katie. Fab work as usual.

Argh, I'm not quite sure it's finished >

a story from you, finally!
YAY!
Really cute and sweet. haha I cant help thinking its such an appropriate title.
Keep the stories going women!

Aw, cute!
Love it!

Very sweet, and definitely holds a promise for future something. Love this line: 'You sounded like Percy just then, mate. I wouldn’t do it again if I were you'. :D

You abandoned us T_T

but i still love your writing;) great job :D