Reviews for A Place for Us

Reviews For: A Place for Us

CaffeineKid 2007-04-08 ch 17,	abuseYou never cease to amaze me...I'm not a big fan of the Miami crew at all, especially Calleigh and Alexx, but you write them really well! And i particularly like how you've (so far!) avoided any DL shipping, i love them, i really do, but i'm afraid that i may overdose on htier fluffiness! Great story, love it, would have reviewed sooner but my computer has decided to pitch a ** fit - we're not speaking at the moment. Anyway, hope for more soon! xox
Lozzarooni 2007-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI have to admit that I really liked this. I love the way that you've taken the characters out of their respective shows and shaken things up a bit. However, I'm a bit lost as to the last chapter when all the characters from all series are paired up without any explaination how they got there - particularly Ryan and Lindsey and Greg and Valera. However, it's very well written and I laughed out loud a lot while reading. I hope to read more soon.
CharmedMummy 2007-03-31 ch 17,	abuseVery fun. I'm still not sure how one gets "transferred" from the NYPD to MDPD, but otherwise it's just a lot of fun to read how you throw all three teams together. You do series of oneshots very well. In the interest of trying to give constructive criticism, you did have a few mistakes here and there, on average probably about one or two a chapter, where a word was improperly added into a sentence or you used the wrong pronoun. But nothing so bad that it detracted from the fun of the stories. :) And I just have to mention, that scene where Flack and Lindsay tag team Sofia and then high five really cracked me up for some reason. :) P.S. The first few chapters are old ones that you brought over from something else, right? I feel like I remember them, but since it looked like you had posted everything today I went ahead and kept reading anyway even though I had already the first chapters.

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